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Wise owl.

The cat is no match for the wise owl.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Bina1
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I probably should not describe the peril of the owl as a delightful poem..........but it is! Clever and such a nice rhyme and pattern, I love it!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    Thanks for reviewing. Happy weekend.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Dallas, this one made me smile - such great images especially since it was funny in a morbid way I suppose. Great submission and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    Thanks, Maureen. Happy weekend.
Comment from mrmorris69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Great Job

I normally try to find something I think needs to be improved and something that I like. I apologize but I could not find anything wrong.

Very Clever, great picture and great words good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    That is the same criteria I use when reviewing. Thanks for the bonus star.
Comment from Debra White
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LOL! I loved the humour in this one :) Your syllable count is spot on for the whitney and your rhyme and meter are great. Teamed with classic presentation, this is a lovely entry. Good luck in the contest. Kindest regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    Thank you for reviewing. Glad you liked it. Art work gives it a big boost.
reply by Debra White on 17-Jan-2014
    It's still great without the artwork... a fun little poem :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    :.)
Comment from evrenios
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This made me laugh out loud! (LOL???!!) How delightful that the stalker gets zapped. You have done this subtly and well. I love the fact that you have described the cat as lithesome which is a great adjective giving the cat personality. Having him stalk also very descriptive. The splat from above is done as an anonymous splat which makes it even funnier. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    I was having some fun. Thank you for the kind review. Really lucked out on the art work.
Comment from His Grayness
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DEAR DALLAS01: BEAUTIFULLY DONE IN PERFECT STRUCTURE FOR THE POETIC STYLE. GLAD TO SEE THE OWL PREVAILED AS I'M AN OWL LOVER WITH A DEEP CURIOSITY OF ALL OF THEIR TRAITS AND MAGNIFICENCE. VERY NICE WORK HERE AND WISH I HAD A SIX FOR THIS ... HIS GRAYNESS

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    Thank you for the virtual six, I'll gladly take it. They are intriguing.
Comment from Janie King
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Oh my goodness, the poor kitty cat. The picture is very interesting and perfect for the poem. Good luck in the writing prompt. God loves you and so do I.

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
    Thank you for reviewing.