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The clue is in the title!

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Comment from Janie King
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Oh now this is a very cute thought, one I hadn't thought about. Good luck in the writing prompt. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
    Hi Janie :) Thank you for your lovely comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from RYME4U
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Excellent. The picture depicts the darling little diva's attitude completely.I love that you added a bit of French
"flavoring" to your poem. Tres Bon!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
    Hi RYME4U, merci beaucoup for your lovely comments! I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from tfawcus
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Isn't that often the way? We're sometimes so busy recording memories that we forget to live them! That young fellow has a good point, I think! Nicely penned and a worthy entry to the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
    Hi tfawcus :) Thank you for your great review. I appreciate your lovely comments. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from 24chas
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The words definitely matched the photo. Great flow to this and imagery. Also, the rhyme scheme worked perfectly. Well done and good luck.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
    Hi 24chas, thank you for your lovely review and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards... :)