Comment from manicblue

Excellent

What a cute poem and the poor cat all dressed up like a duck was delightful! Good use of alliteration of the letters "c-t-m". Good luck in this contest.
MB xx

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

Thanks, MB - Glad you liked this poem and cute picture. Do appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

Oh, your picture is so cute and so match the wittiness in your words. I really got a chuckle as it is a mixed bag of meows and quacks. Blessings and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

Thanks, Matoshka! So glad you got a chuckle from this poem and cute picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

reply by Matoshka on 27-Oct-2013

So welcome, and I did get a chuckle. It is a joy. What a mind you have. LOL Blessings

Comment from Nichola

Excellent

This is an adorable 5-7-5. I really like your first line with the repeating c's - cat's chicken costume, and the alliteration of trick or treater' tykes.

Your last line is humorous - meows mix with clucks - good consonance with mix and clucks.

Good luck in the contest. Nichola

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

Thanks for the wonderful review, Nichola. So glad you enjoyed this poem, and thanks for noticing the literary devices - in such a short piece, I try too weave in as many as possible. Do appreciate all your comments ... ;o)

Comment from denhagan

Excellent

This is a nice 5-7-5 poem about a cat for the contest. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Has a cute picture to go with the poem.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

Thanks, denhagen - Glad you liked this poem and cute picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

reply by denhagan on 30-Oct-2013

You're very welcome, :0)
Dennis

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

What a cute idea and so realistic. Question, did you really do that to your cat? I had such a good chuckle over your poem. A very clever idea and it flowed well through your 5-7-5 limits in your contest. Good job and good luck in your contest as I know you will do well with your entry.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

Thanks, Annie - So glad you got a chuckle from this 5-7-5. No - didn't really do that, but would if I found the costume. Do appreciate all your comments ... ;o) Art

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is so cute, starkat, i enjoyed reading this poem about the halloween cat and the indignity of being forced into a chicken costume, made me smile. good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013

thanks, sweetwoodjax! so glad you enjoyed this somewhat silly, costumed kitty 5-7-5. do appreciate your comments ... ;o)