Autumn Leaves
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
A free verse with good imagery of
Autumn leaves dancing like a Gypsy'
both ardent and carefree.
Good alliteration in colorful and complete.
Good job Margaret. Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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A free verse with good imagery of
Autumn leaves dancing like a Gypsy'
both ardent and carefree.
Good alliteration in colorful and complete.
Good job Margaret. Nancy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello Honeycomb, Nancy, Thank you for your wonderful review. It's nice to know that you enjoyed my free-flow from the heart. LateBloomer
Comment from fastdigits
Ah, that was beautiful the
way you colored the landscape
with your dancing leaves made
of gold and rust colored confetti
that swirl and pirouette carefree
as the winds themselves in this
dance of Autumn Leaves.
Well done
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Ah, that was beautiful the
way you colored the landscape
with your dancing leaves made
of gold and rust colored confetti
that swirl and pirouette carefree
as the winds themselves in this
dance of Autumn Leaves.
Well done
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you, fastdigits, for the wonderful review. I hope that you enjoyed the free-flowing dance of the Autumn Leaves 'cause they're swirling everywhere. Smiles, LateBloomer
Comment from kye saich
Very beautiful poem with great comparisons between the love of to people with the changing of the seasons.
Well done.
Kye Saich.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Very beautiful poem with great comparisons between the love of to people with the changing of the seasons.
Well done.
Kye Saich.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello kye saich, Thank you for your wonderful review ... "By God, you got it." Big-teeth smile. Stop by my writing pad again. LateBloomer
Comment from michaelcahill
Oh, I really like your personal and direct style. It is quite effective and engaging. It somehow involves me more as the reader and makes the piece come even more alive. Beautiful and original images. This is some excellent work. Most enjoyable piece. mikey
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Oh, I really like your personal and direct style. It is quite effective and engaging. It somehow involves me more as the reader and makes the piece come even more alive. Beautiful and original images. This is some excellent work. Most enjoyable piece. mikey
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello michaelcahill, mikey, thank you for the wonderful review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from allborn66
This is a very beautiful poem. I loved the references to the seasons. The word choice is strong.You communicated your theme very well.
Barbra
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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This is a very beautiful poem. I loved the references to the seasons. The word choice is strong.You communicated your theme very well.
Barbra
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello allborn66, Barbara, Thank you for the wonderful and for your understanding of this poem. LateBloomer
Comment from emrpoems
With the blossoming of autumn,
Love is colorful and complete,
Yet yearns for springtime when passion
Becomes so verdant and renewed
Well done free verse. Even though Autumn brings color to your love life it needs the vibrance of spring to thrive. The picture is befitting for the poem
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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With the blossoming of autumn,
Love is colorful and complete,
Yet yearns for springtime when passion
Becomes so verdant and renewed
Well done free verse. Even though Autumn brings color to your love life it needs the vibrance of spring to thrive. The picture is befitting for the poem
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you, emrpoems, for your great review and for enjoy my poem. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer."
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in colorful and complete
lovely descriptive detail that is the perfect backdrop for
the romantic tone of the poem
Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in colorful and complete
lovely descriptive detail that is the perfect backdrop for
the romantic tone of the poem
Brooke
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello adewpearl, Brooke, The beauty of FS is the people, and people like you. Thank you for the great review and for sharing your thoughts. There's a lot to be said for crispy, clear, consistent, and precise ... just a few words that lovingly describe you and are only meant to be complimentary. Sincerely, LateBloomer
Comment from Nichola
Your poem has a light and airy feel to it. The last stanza creates a warm feeling as you describe the growing feeling of love,
"Now wrap these leaves around your soul
Take them with you wherever you
Go, and feel my love grow..." - wonderful
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Your poem has a light and airy feel to it. The last stanza creates a warm feeling as you describe the growing feeling of love,
"Now wrap these leaves around your soul
Take them with you wherever you
Go, and feel my love grow..." - wonderful
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you, Nichola, for sharing your thoughts and understanding this poem. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from JennaG
This poem is lovely! My favorite part is the comparison of the swirling leaves to a dancing gypsy. What a great way of describing autumn's falling leaves! This was a true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. :)
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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This poem is lovely! My favorite part is the comparison of the swirling leaves to a dancing gypsy. What a great way of describing autumn's falling leaves! This was a true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Hello JennaG, thank you for the great review. The poem was released before I was ready. It now has a photo. Thank you for your generous review. LateBloomer