Vicarious-The Ride
Why we read about what others have experienced15 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
, as I ride safely on my vicarious star. .. great phrase - love it!
as to who did the Dew, in a room, to whom. ,, not sure what Dew means
ElP, I really enjoyed this poetic prose. The internal rhyme in the lines was quite charming.
Nice to meet you!
Have a great week. :)
Sonali
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But I am (are) also ready to arrive at a crime scene ... need to remove 'are'
So if you want to write to motivate (not motive),
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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, as I ride safely on my vicarious star. .. great phrase - love it!
as to who did the Dew, in a room, to whom. ,, not sure what Dew means
ElP, I really enjoyed this poetic prose. The internal rhyme in the lines was quite charming.
Nice to meet you!
Have a great week. :)
Sonali
Spags:
But I am (are) also ready to arrive at a crime scene ... need to remove 'are'
So if you want to write to motivate (not motive),
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Dew is a reference to Mountain Dew, a popular soft drink that is high in sugar and caffeine. Many young people drink many bottles of it.
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I get it - suggest you put a wee note in the author notes. That way, you won't have to respond to annoying queries. :)
Comment from daeneam
People who loved reading find even a four-word signage enjoyable, like "keep-off-the-grass". Just using your imagination, generates a lot of meaning. So, why I read about what others have experienced? It is an addition to my experiences, a subtraction to my faults, a multiplication of my blessings and a division of my regrets.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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People who loved reading find even a four-word signage enjoyable, like "keep-off-the-grass". Just using your imagination, generates a lot of meaning. So, why I read about what others have experienced? It is an addition to my experiences, a subtraction to my faults, a multiplication of my blessings and a division of my regrets.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Bingo.
Thank you.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
LOVE THESE BITS: A poem within the prose?
So if you want to write to motive, invigorate, or scare, you must tell a good tale and take the rider there.
to laugh or to cry, to give thanks, or to ask why.
the day, the place, the persons, and the play.
that I am he, and he is me, and it is we
theory as to who did the Dew, in a room, to whom.
So if you want to write to motive, invigorate, or scare, you must tell a good tale and take the rider there.
Deserves a 6 but alas I ran out.
Regards:
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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LOVE THESE BITS: A poem within the prose?
So if you want to write to motive, invigorate, or scare, you must tell a good tale and take the rider there.
to laugh or to cry, to give thanks, or to ask why.
the day, the place, the persons, and the play.
that I am he, and he is me, and it is we
theory as to who did the Dew, in a room, to whom.
So if you want to write to motive, invigorate, or scare, you must tell a good tale and take the rider there.
Deserves a 6 but alas I ran out.
Regards:
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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Dear E: Well deserved. Just posted 'Old Glory'.
Cheers: Steve C
Comment from Silent1rose
This is wonderful. You couldn't have said it any better. I had to look up the word vicarious (I learned something new) lol I will keep this in mind as I continue writing my book. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. ~ Rose
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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This is wonderful. You couldn't have said it any better. I had to look up the word vicarious (I learned something new) lol I will keep this in mind as I continue writing my book. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. ~ Rose
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Rondeno
Fine. But why a car? Why not a sailing ship? Space ship? Why not a flying carpet? I think you get what I'm saying. thanks for the stimulating write.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Fine. But why a car? Why not a sailing ship? Space ship? Why not a flying carpet? I think you get what I'm saying. thanks for the stimulating write.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
