Heaven and Earth
An Acrostic poem18 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
You did an excellent write. Your Acrostic poem has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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You did an excellent write. Your Acrostic poem has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad it flowed well for you. The flow and rhyme are very important to me. Thank you again for this sweet review!
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You're welcome, Suzie. Charlie
Comment from Sylvia Page
Suzie, this is indeed a beautiful 'heavenly' acrostic poem. I loved the smooth flow. I did not seem forced at all.
Great job
Blessings,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Suzie, this is indeed a beautiful 'heavenly' acrostic poem. I loved the smooth flow. I did not seem forced at all.
Great job
Blessings,
Sylvia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I always hope my poems flow well for the reader so I'm glad it did for you. I truly appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from Nosha17
What a lovely message and the pic is so appropriate. Well-written with nice use of language and rhyming techniques. It flows along well. I agree with your sentiments. Faye
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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What a lovely message and the pic is so appropriate. Well-written with nice use of language and rhyming techniques. It flows along well. I agree with your sentiments. Faye
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you liked the photo choice as well. Searched a long time to find it. Thank you again for this sweet review!
Comment from Dougspoetry
What a great poem packed full of truth! There are so many encouraging words in this poem, and the artwork is beautiful. Nice rhyming, and a smooth flow of words. Keep up the great work!
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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What a great poem packed full of truth! There are so many encouraging words in this poem, and the artwork is beautiful. Nice rhyming, and a smooth flow of words. Keep up the great work!
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Oh, God bless you! You made my day! I'm so glad you liked what I had to say. I searched a long time to find a photo to go with the poem so I'm thrilled you liked that as well. Thank you so much for reading it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from pattipac
Your perfect choice of artwork serves as an excellent introduction to your well penned Acrostic poem about your faith in God.
"Eternal glory, peace so profound
No reason to fear if you're Heaven bound."
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Your perfect choice of artwork serves as an excellent introduction to your well penned Acrostic poem about your faith in God.
"Eternal glory, peace so profound
No reason to fear if you're Heaven bound."
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I really debated on which photo to use for this so I'm glad you liked my choice. Thank you again for this sweet review!
Comment from expressions9
A lovely acrostic Suzie! I like the flow and the wonderful description of the hope of heaven for all who believe. The photo fits the poem perfectly too.
Thanks for sharing :)
Blessings,
Christine
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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A lovely acrostic Suzie! I like the flow and the wonderful description of the hope of heaven for all who believe. The photo fits the poem perfectly too.
Thanks for sharing :)
Blessings,
Christine
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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God bless you! Can't tell you how happy I am that you liked it. Glad you liked the photo as well. I think I spent more time trying to find the right photo than I did writing the poem! haha Thanks again for this sweet review!
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You're welcome Suzie. I know what that's like :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your poem and the picture accent each other in a beautiful way. "When he takes me by the hand, and leads me to the promised land, What a Day, Glorious Day, that will be."
Thanks for the touching read!
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Your poem and the picture accent each other in a beautiful way. "When he takes me by the hand, and leads me to the promised land, What a Day, Glorious Day, that will be."
Thanks for the touching read!
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent poem that grant understanding to the Apostle Paul's, " Oh Death, where is your sting?" Beautiful poem and very rewarding. Nice photo. Well done poet.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Excellent poem that grant understanding to the Apostle Paul's, " Oh Death, where is your sting?" Beautiful poem and very rewarding. Nice photo. Well done poet.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you! What a sweet review. I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!