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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Big Day Getting Closer"
Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!

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Comment from c_lucas
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Many a young couple had a rough rocky road when they got married. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very very good imagery.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
    Thanks, Bro charlie. Looking forward to your story starting up again when you are up to it. We are losing a lot of the good writers in here Bro! have had another thought I forgot to put in here will add it re the nice neighbours who moved in after the others got chucked.
Comment from apky
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This must be a very moving biography and I regret I just happened
upon it now. Which means I need to go back and read past chapters
in order to fully appreciate the story. And this doesn't mean I do appreciate
what I've just read.
Well done,
Apky

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
    Hi new friend. Glad to be picking up new friends as there has been a fall off of some of them in here lately. Promise to look your stuff up and reciprocate. There are chapters with rewards still on back from this if interested. I just changed the Background on suggestion of another FS friend I may do same back through a few other chapters. I have neglected to continue to warn I speak British English as some Americans have misunderstood some expressions. Cheers, from Australia.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter in your life story. Any girl's mother would have some objection about her daughter's choice for a husband. Luckily you have proof her wrong and she hope to change her objections.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
    Thanks Sis, much appreciate your review. Did you notice I changed the background? Someone suggested the change.
Comment from Sis Cat
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I am very happy for you as you describe how you met the love of your life and the opposition your faced. This was my favorite line:

Following all this Louise's mum being the good Catholic mother she was, began to scheme to try and break us up.

Though you were on in a good neighborhood:

What a great start, in the place we were to spend our first six months together, prior to the purchase of our home.

Thank you for sharing your engaging memoir.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
    Thanks Sis Cat have seen you around but maybe never done much with your stuff. I promise to reciprocate. There are still some reviewing rewards if interested a step or two back. I started a new suggestion from someone in this chapter I might go back and include it in some of the previous chapters.
Comment from mermaids
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It is so nice tor read about people getting married and happily. Your words hold the reader's interest and remind us of how wonderful marriage is. Excellent prose form,I see no errors or need for changes.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014
    Hi friend hopwe you saw the Youtube Movie a short video of some of the wedding we did not know it was being done would have asked for more. Did not want official video as they get under your feet. Thanks again. I also managed to fix the tune for my song I wrote about work on Chapter 22 if interested. Sorry no rewards on that one at present.
Comment from patcelaw
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What a delightful read of a very romantic time for you and Louise. I was able to see in my mind the picture of the wedding and could almost hear you singing to your bride. Blessings. BTW you married Louise the day my grand daughter was 1 year old

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2014
    Wow did you see the Youtubes one of the Wedding (only ten minutes of) and the other of Psalm 27 was not mad about the woman's get up ion that. Thanks for coming by friend.
reply by patcelaw on 09-Dec-2014
    I didn't view the You tubes.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2014
    Ok if you want here is the main one of the short bit of our wedding

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkpo_IUbUPU&feature=youtu.be
Comment from Caressa_08
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Your radiant, happy bride of 27 years ago, & by her side in the picture, yourself, her new husband, walking out of your wedding ceremony was a good photo to highlight your story, "Bliss." This marriage seemed to be a good one from the start with that beautiful song that was created from the Psalm 27 from the Bible...A perfect way to start a marriage..You Seem to be a very understanding in-tuned husband to your wife's needs & ..And, she seems that way also to yours...A marriage made in Heaven...Though, after being married for over 42 yrs.. I know a good marriage takes a lot of work to keep it that way, & think you would agree.

Caressa

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2014
    AMEn Sis I believe we are related in heaven right ha! All one in Christ jesus. I was disappointed in the lady that sang on the Youtube I may still try and get the music I had on a record here but now on track in the computer. I need to convert it to MP3 it was my favourite version of the music. Apart from our later Pastor's wife who sang it on that day you would have read her comments she gave me on Face book just today and I added it. Thanks for coming back again and looking. I knew folks of like precious faith would enjoy it. Psalm 27 very much described our tremulous courtship as far as the to be inlaws were concerned. Lord Bless muchly.
Comment from mikemagine
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Interesting chapter, Geoff. The 1980s seem so long ago and far away. I'd read ch. one of this book to see if I could get a feel for the story.

I've never been married and prob. never will be. Many guys have told me I'm better off, lol. Well, so far, it seems like you and your wife have had a good life together. There's a LOT I haven't read of this, but from the little I have read, that seems to be the case.

Psalm 27 is/was an excellent choice!

I shall take a look at the wedding video and look for the one of the dog. So far, I haven't been able to find the one of the dog.

Peace,

Mike

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
    Ha!! I AM THE LITTLE DOG! HEHE!! Thanks for coming by. This was for all my long time FS friends who have followed my story in a long long time I felt like they would like to see our wedding excerpt as rough as it is. ONly sorry I had not got this on Youtube a lot sooner.
reply by mikemagine on 08-Dec-2014
    Glad to read and rev. your story, Sankey:-)
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
    I just got some fresh info to add to the chapter so will let you know when it is added from the lady who sang at our wedding...NOT the woman on the Youtube I added arrgghhh!
reply by mikemagine on 08-Dec-2014
    Alright, Geoff. I'm going to look for photos of Pugs. If I can, I'll cut and paste them and send them to you by email. If I can't, I'll list the site addresses.

    Mike
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
    Thanks for the pugs mate I got them all have replied by e-mail.
reply by mikemagine on 08-Dec-2014
    Glad to help out, Geoff.

    Mike
Comment from Ben Colder
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This is good, bro Sounds as if God matched you two up just right . Now comes as Paul said, trouble in the flesh. Rubbing stones I think. Well done. Bro. I see nothing wrong.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
    I promoted this bro because of the old Video I just added from Youtube last night took hours to upload the ten minutes to You tube. Thanks for the recview mate now go look. There are two Youtubes one of Psalm 27 and the other of our short piece of our wedding we were not aware it was filmed wiash we knew would have got more but we did not want an official videoing.
reply by Ben Colder on 07-Dec-2014
    I saw it. She was beautiful dressed in white. The guy wearing the glasses next to her, well I will keep my comments to myself about that fellow. It was a large wedding . Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
    Wash your mouth outwith soap mate Grrrr she didn't marry me for my looks ok.
reply by Ben Colder on 07-Dec-2014
    Had to be money. lol.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
    hey her mob have more money than ours ever did ha. her Father and her Brother and her Uncle (deceased a couple of weeks ago) and her cousins and Nieces are all accountants!
Comment from royowen
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I think the chapter is fine it's about the same length as others Geoff, I enjoyed this episode, it's written in a sane, good natured way, you're obviously easy going, Geoff, in health you both appear to have been short changed, however still cheerful, well done, absorbingly interesting, look forward to the next, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
    Thanks Bro it's all about the Lord and how He brought us together. I like the thought that from before we were both born He knew He had us picked for each other. the last and this one was split this was the original