Grandfather's Secret Sunflower
Playing hide n sneak and something wonderful happens16 total reviews
Comment from Pullmanspb
Some times all I can do is to pay attention to my reaction to a poem, what the poem evokes. It brings back memories how a bunch of us, as teens, would plan hide-and-seek, at night. I recall the smug joy when I hid so well the rest of the seekers had to give up.
That was a fun time and that was a fun powm.
Steven
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Some times all I can do is to pay attention to my reaction to a poem, what the poem evokes. It brings back memories how a bunch of us, as teens, would plan hide-and-seek, at night. I recall the smug joy when I hid so well the rest of the seekers had to give up.
That was a fun time and that was a fun powm.
Steven
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from c_lucas
As a child, it is an adventure to go where it is forbidden to go. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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As a child, it is an adventure to go where it is forbidden to go. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
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You're welcome, Perissa. Charlie
Comment from SteveY
For not having any formal training in poetry I think you've done a really good job with this one. Wonderful poetic language and metaphors used throughout!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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For not having any formal training in poetry I think you've done a really good job with this one. Wonderful poetic language and metaphors used throughout!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for kind review.
Comment from rhonny
Very unusual and interesting take on the world of Nature. Your well chosen words tell us the flower's view of life. I think 'pedals' should be 'petals'.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Very unusual and interesting take on the world of Nature. Your well chosen words tell us the flower's view of life. I think 'pedals' should be 'petals'.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you and good catch on the misspelling. I fixed it :)
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:O)
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. I loved the tone it has. The mental images it inspires are brilliant. The picture is a nice touch.
Barbara
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. I loved the tone it has. The mental images it inspires are brilliant. The picture is a nice touch.
Barbara
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jendowoz
This poem is well written, Parissa. It has that clever double meaning and makes you see the sunflower in a whole new light. Writing this from this perspective can also be interpreted to life and living as a person, well done.
regards, Jen
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This poem is well written, Parissa. It has that clever double meaning and makes you see the sunflower in a whole new light. Writing this from this perspective can also be interpreted to life and living as a person, well done.
regards, Jen
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
