Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Warrior "This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
32 total reviews
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
A beautifully worded poem.I like your interpretation of life s a realm of love and beauty. it is so true. Really the power of God's love within set us all at ease.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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A beautifully worded poem.I like your interpretation of life s a realm of love and beauty. it is so true. Really the power of God's love within set us all at ease.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your review, it was very helpful to read it. Thank you!
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Sarah
This poetry speaks more than one undeniable truth. The
reader-friendly language makes it easy to comprehend.
The rhymes are selected and used nicely. The attached
photo is a nice enhancement. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Well Done ~ Sarah
This poetry speaks more than one undeniable truth. The
reader-friendly language makes it easy to comprehend.
The rhymes are selected and used nicely. The attached
photo is a nice enhancement. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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This is such a beautiful review. I love it and say a heartfelt thank you. Gb
Comment from emrpoems
alliteration--sinking sand, rule and reign. Should take another look at this poem and see if you can put some music in the words.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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alliteration--sinking sand, rule and reign. Should take another look at this poem and see if you can put some music in the words.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Put music to is my hearts desire. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gb
Comment from Eternal Muse
A marvelous spiritual write which I found very uplifting. Great rhymes, flow and cadence to compliment your message.
A warrior who fights to win
With the power of God's light within.
His destiny is to rule and reign
With Jesus in His heavenly domain.
What a phenomenal picture!
I very much enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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A marvelous spiritual write which I found very uplifting. Great rhymes, flow and cadence to compliment your message.
A warrior who fights to win
With the power of God's light within.
His destiny is to rule and reign
With Jesus in His heavenly domain.
What a phenomenal picture!
I very much enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Incredible review. Don't know what to say except a heartfelt thank you. Gb
Comment from Sam Mendonca
A very well written piece with some great emotional and descriptive wording from the writer.
I enjoyed reading about the journey very much.
The photo goes very well with the poetry.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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A very well written piece with some great emotional and descriptive wording from the writer.
I enjoyed reading about the journey very much.
The photo goes very well with the poetry.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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I don't know what to say except thank you for your marvellous review. Gb
Comment from denhagan
This was a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming. Has a beautiful picture to accompany the poem. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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This was a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming. Has a beautiful picture to accompany the poem. Nice poem.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Hi! denhagan. Thank you so much for your very positive reaction to my poem. I highly appreciate the well spoken words about it but I'm curious about the four stars. Gudbjorg
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You're welcome, ??
Dennis
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
I love your message, it's in the little things - so often it takes just a smile or an encouraging word :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
I love your message, it's in the little things - so often it takes just a smile or an encouraging word :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you Brooke for your excellent review of my poem and I'm so glad you like its message. With appreciation, Gudbjorg
Comment from Finnur
Thanks so much, Gu°bj¶rg.
Your poem moves one to a place in the spirit not wanting to come back.
Lifts up to a higher ground and brings down heaven to heart.
It greatly welcomes the one that reads it over, and afterwards leaves him richer in the spirit. Well done! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, Gu°bj¶rg.
Your poem moves one to a place in the spirit not wanting to come back.
Lifts up to a higher ground and brings down heaven to heart.
It greatly welcomes the one that reads it over, and afterwards leaves him richer in the spirit. Well done! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you Finnur for such a wonderful and moving reaction. It was lovely to read it and I'm glad it lifted you in the Spirit and gave you so much truth. Gb
Comment from ruminative scribbler
What a lovely poem with a wonderful sentiment.
I quite agree with your words.
We are all 'warriors' of God and are all constantly fighting and struggling against our base desires in order to please Him and make our lives easier, ultimately; both in this world and the next.
Thanks for sharing :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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What a lovely poem with a wonderful sentiment.
I quite agree with your words.
We are all 'warriors' of God and are all constantly fighting and struggling against our base desires in order to please Him and make our lives easier, ultimately; both in this world and the next.
Thanks for sharing :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting review. Sometimes, it seems like the battles are too hard but they are what make us strong and, as you say, ultimately make our lives easier, not only in this world but helping us be better prepared for the next. It's really good to have something to fight - and our base desires certainly provide a challenge that's worth the struggle.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to this poem
The message is so true you express each line with deep emotions.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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I love the words to this poem
The message is so true you express each line with deep emotions.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, and I'm so happy to hear that it meant a lot to you. Gudbjorg
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You're very welcome, sorry I'm late getting back to you I'm so behind.