The Intruder
100 - 150 word contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, that's a little outside the box. I've read a number of the entries for this contest. I'd say yours was a contender for first spot. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Yes, that's a little outside the box. I've read a number of the entries for this contest. I'd say yours was a contender for first spot. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the excellent rating,also thank you for the encouraging comment and wishing me luck in the competition. I've just read through the other entries so I might need all the luck I can get - plus a few votes!
Comment from lorijean
What a lovely poem, I used to have aquariums and m y cat would fall asleep on tope because it was nice and warm, but you paint a great picture.....
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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What a lovely poem, I used to have aquariums and m y cat would fall asleep on tope because it was nice and warm, but you paint a great picture.....
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Lorijean. I'm holding my breath until I see the result of the competition - well, not really, but I hope your excellent review is reflected in the voting!