My Favorite Time Of Year
Contest Entry31 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
Your five - seven - five does all it's supposed to do. There is the term, autumn. I like the phrase 'an autumn strip show' as it creates the fun side of the yearly cycle.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Your five - seven - five does all it's supposed to do. There is the term, autumn. I like the phrase 'an autumn strip show' as it creates the fun side of the yearly cycle.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thanks Bill for your review. I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from Leineco
LOL....cute take on the disrobing of trees
when autumn comes calling! ...... I wonder
where the dollar bills go?.......and just who
is dropping them LMAO
Nice 5-7-5 write :-)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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LOL....cute take on the disrobing of trees
when autumn comes calling! ...... I wonder
where the dollar bills go?.......and just who
is dropping them LMAO
Nice 5-7-5 write :-)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your comical review, I got a good laugh from it. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from w.j.debi
What a bit of fun comparing the dropping of the autumn foliage to a strip tease leaving the limbs bare. Well written 5-7-5.
Looks like you won the contest, so congrats.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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What a bit of fun comparing the dropping of the autumn foliage to a strip tease leaving the limbs bare. Well written 5-7-5.
Looks like you won the contest, so congrats.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your review, I appreciate it. Have a great Sunday. Bill
Comment from Zue65
This obviously deserved to be a winner, a self contained poem that speaks of autumn and the falling leaves like a strip show, taking off the clothes, exposing bare limbs. The meta
phor is perfect to capture the visual image of autumn. Thanks for sharing, God bless.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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This obviously deserved to be a winner, a self contained poem that speaks of autumn and the falling leaves like a strip show, taking off the clothes, exposing bare limbs. The meta
phor is perfect to capture the visual image of autumn. Thanks for sharing, God bless.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your inspiring review, I appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and yours. Bill
Comment from tbacha58
I am so impressed by your poetry trophies, whoa, you are one of the greatest writers, I am so glad I came along to read more of your poems. This one of course is a winner to, its beautiful, and the picture since you were young its so impressive. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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I am so impressed by your poetry trophies, whoa, you are one of the greatest writers, I am so glad I came along to read more of your poems. This one of course is a winner to, its beautiful, and the picture since you were young its so impressive. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you Terry for your wonderful review and for your great compliments. I really appreciate it very much my friend. Have a nice weekend and thanks again. Bill
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made great use of every syllable in this creative, appealing 5-7-5 about fall. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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You have made great use of every syllable in this creative, appealing 5-7-5 about fall. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much Janice. Have a great weekend. Bill
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem was extremely creative and the author's flowed well. The last line of the poem said
it all. The poem made the reader smile.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Excellent Poem! The poem was extremely creative and the author's flowed well. The last line of the poem said
it all. The poem made the reader smile.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much harmony for your great review. Have a nice weekend. Bill
Comment from kiwijenny
Perfect.....so perfect.......I can hear the music .......
Well done and well deserving of the contest win..............
An Autumn strip show............................................
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Perfect.....so perfect.......I can hear the music .......
Well done and well deserving of the contest win..............
An Autumn strip show............................................
God bless
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thanks Jenny for you great review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice weekend. Bill
Comment from dmt1967
This is a well deserved win my friend I never thought of it like that the trees getting undressed I like it congratulations on the win thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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This is a well deserved win my friend I never thought of it like that the trees getting undressed I like it congratulations on the win thank you for sharing
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your thoughts, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend. Bill
Comment from barleygirl
Cute poem & kinda typical point of view for a man *smile* . . . Just loving those strip shows, huh? Congrats on your win with this simple, straightforward poem. The imagery is well-done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Cute poem & kinda typical point of view for a man *smile* . . . Just loving those strip shows, huh? Congrats on your win with this simple, straightforward poem. The imagery is well-done.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Well, you know how men are! Thanks for your review and have a great weekend. Bill