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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "a bluebell wood"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from lorijean
Such a beautiful sight to see, the bluebells in the woods, a lovely poem you have written a pleasure to read, thank you for sharing.....
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Such a beautiful sight to see, the bluebells in the woods, a lovely poem you have written a pleasure to read, thank you for sharing.....
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind comments and the generous rating.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your nonet form and your addition of your own artwork. Your addition of rhyme adds to the intensity of the description of the wood. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I admired your nonet form and your addition of your own artwork. Your addition of rhyme adds to the intensity of the description of the wood. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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thanks for the compliment on my painting, and the generous rating for my nonet. poem I do really appreciate it
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, I enjoyed reading this poem and its message is clear. I especially liked:
silent bells chime
just seeing
makes us
sigh
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(Great imagery.)
As this is a writing prompt entry, I you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Hello author, I enjoyed reading this poem and its message is clear. I especially liked:
silent bells chime
just seeing
makes us
sigh
~
(Great imagery.)
As this is a writing prompt entry, I you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your generous rating and your kind comments.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
I like your optional use of rhyming
good alliteration in walk/wood
lovely descriptive detail of the woods filled with these silent bells :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
I like your optional use of rhyming
good alliteration in walk/wood
lovely descriptive detail of the woods filled with these silent bells :-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate it.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Such a serene, genuinely warm and heartfelt appreciation of the many wondrous beauties found in nature you have. It's clearly evident by this elegant nonet you've penned.
I believe more of us ought to make time to take a quiet, solitary walk along a lush wooded path. Of course, I realize it's not as easy for city dwellers as it is for someone like myself, living in an area surrounded by such sights and woods. Still, it does help us get in tune and in touch with nature on so many levels...
Wonderfully done!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Such a serene, genuinely warm and heartfelt appreciation of the many wondrous beauties found in nature you have. It's clearly evident by this elegant nonet you've penned.
I believe more of us ought to make time to take a quiet, solitary walk along a lush wooded path. Of course, I realize it's not as easy for city dwellers as it is for someone like myself, living in an area surrounded by such sights and woods. Still, it does help us get in tune and in touch with nature on so many levels...
Wonderfully done!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review, I am glad you like subject so much. Thanks also for the generous rating.
Comment from Martin Chan
" a blue bell wood " is a Nonet Poem Contest entry poetry, written with nice choice of words describing an uplifting experience to walk into the wood. It is a simple format but has a good presentation and theme.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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" a blue bell wood " is a Nonet Poem Contest entry poetry, written with nice choice of words describing an uplifting experience to walk into the wood. It is a simple format but has a good presentation and theme.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the review and the generous rating.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Mary, there was such deep, pastoral delight in your lines.
I really wished I could walk in those woods.
Love .. silent bells chime ... what a pretty picture you create in my head!
Lovely, my friend.
All the best in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Mary, there was such deep, pastoral delight in your lines.
I really wished I could walk in those woods.
Love .. silent bells chime ... what a pretty picture you create in my head!
Lovely, my friend.
All the best in the contest. :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the best wishes and the kind comments.
Comment from emjaihammond
Agreed and this artwork is really just too pretty for words.
I'm so happy you could bring me along as you discover something so beautiful.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Agreed and this artwork is really just too pretty for words.
I'm so happy you could bring me along as you discover something so beautiful.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the lovely compliments of my painting, and the generous review.
Comment from SteveY
That's ok, it lends itself to the mystery of nature that you so wonderefully expressed in this beautiful little piece of writing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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That's ok, it lends itself to the mystery of nature that you so wonderefully expressed in this beautiful little piece of writing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks Steve for a lovely review. I appreciate it
Comment from marre5
Nice images that fit into strictures of this genre of poem .
Like the bells ringing silently.
Must be beautiful to see!
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Nice images that fit into strictures of this genre of poem .
Like the bells ringing silently.
Must be beautiful to see!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the comments.