Words Rate Your Personality
A Non-Fiction in about 150 words. Test your personality.....74 total reviews
Comment from Razz
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PS
14 Let the words of my mouth, and the meditation of my heart, be acceptable in thy sight, O Lord, my strength, and my redeemer.
Have a good evening.
Razz
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14 Let the words of my mouth, and the meditation of my heart, be acceptable in thy sight, O Lord, my strength, and my redeemer.
Have a good evening.
Razz
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from AnonymousWisdom
One's personality is tested or rated by public well
Do you mean, "the public well"? Doesn't make sense the way it's written.
Test is a continuous process in public and it spreads over time.
Subject and verb are funky, maybe "Testing is" would make more sense?
Many overrate or underrate their personality emotionally or prejudicially waving the essence of words.
This would be better written as: Many over- or underrate their personalities, emotionally or prejudicially waiving the essence of words.
one's personality in family, society, nation or world.
Add "their" before family so it will carry over to the following nouns.
Most of the things you say here are well-known statements. The way you express them makes them convoluted. ADD DETAILS AND EXAMPLES. Draw the reader in, make them connect to your writing. With the piece you have here, you only make a reader say, "Yeah. I know. So what?" and walk away. There's no point to reading this unless you make it interesting and relatable, because many of your ideas, while moral and nice, are concepts most readers will already know about and understand.
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One's personality is tested or rated by public well
Do you mean, "the public well"? Doesn't make sense the way it's written.
Test is a continuous process in public and it spreads over time.
Subject and verb are funky, maybe "Testing is" would make more sense?
Many overrate or underrate their personality emotionally or prejudicially waving the essence of words.
This would be better written as: Many over- or underrate their personalities, emotionally or prejudicially waiving the essence of words.
one's personality in family, society, nation or world.
Add "their" before family so it will carry over to the following nouns.
Most of the things you say here are well-known statements. The way you express them makes them convoluted. ADD DETAILS AND EXAMPLES. Draw the reader in, make them connect to your writing. With the piece you have here, you only make a reader say, "Yeah. I know. So what?" and walk away. There's no point to reading this unless you make it interesting and relatable, because many of your ideas, while moral and nice, are concepts most readers will already know about and understand.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from jjstar
Hmmmmm....again..broad and sweeping generalizations without any details. Though the sentiments or theses are well stated, I am left wondering from whence these premises evolved. I feel like Socrates is standing in the public square, touting these philosophies, but when the debate begins he says, "Bye now!" Can you elaborate?If you followed through and added some meat to these great bones I would adjust your rating.
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Hmmmmm....again..broad and sweeping generalizations without any details. Though the sentiments or theses are well stated, I am left wondering from whence these premises evolved. I feel like Socrates is standing in the public square, touting these philosophies, but when the debate begins he says, "Bye now!" Can you elaborate?If you followed through and added some meat to these great bones I would adjust your rating.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Raver
Well written, informative and thought provoking. Do the words shape your personality? Or your personality shape your words? who knows any way this piece of writing makes you think before you speak. Words are very powerful.
Good post.
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Well written, informative and thought provoking. Do the words shape your personality? Or your personality shape your words? who knows any way this piece of writing makes you think before you speak. Words are very powerful.
Good post.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from firdousy
Of course, absolute truth.
It is words that tell our personality
when we release them..
It matters which words we realese
when and how and in front of whom..
In your non-fiction you have created quiet
a maze of words about words that tells so many
words on how to develop our pesonality
with the help of words.
Thank you..
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Of course, absolute truth.
It is words that tell our personality
when we release them..
It matters which words we realese
when and how and in front of whom..
In your non-fiction you have created quiet
a maze of words about words that tells so many
words on how to develop our pesonality
with the help of words.
Thank you..
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi ALD
Where do I start! I am speechless, stunned!
What do you mean? What are you trying to say to the reader. Simply confused!
Wisdom guides in choosing, using words and keeping attitude toward word practice. Wise words make wise or immortal personality.
Doh.
Regards, Pete
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Hi ALD
Where do I start! I am speechless, stunned!
What do you mean? What are you trying to say to the reader. Simply confused!
Wisdom guides in choosing, using words and keeping attitude toward word practice. Wise words make wise or immortal personality.
Doh.
Regards, Pete
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from justmarly
Standard of word usage makes the standard of one's personality. A word unwisely expressed may foster a poor personality that history does not count it adequately. As words open one's wisdom so wisdom reflects in one's words. This is so true. Keep a good personality and people will like you. JM
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Standard of word usage makes the standard of one's personality. A word unwisely expressed may foster a poor personality that history does not count it adequately. As words open one's wisdom so wisdom reflects in one's words. This is so true. Keep a good personality and people will like you. JM
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from Darkhorse555
In my evaluation into ones personality in the wisdom of words forever learning a stepping stone in further knowledge lovely piece
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In my evaluation into ones personality in the wisdom of words forever learning a stepping stone in further knowledge lovely piece
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from donaldww
I do enjoy the essence of words, especially the best ones that are put down in the best order.
However, words do not contain any inherent wisdom. Using words correctly may transfer knowledge from one party to another, which may lead to wisdom in some people.
Using words poorly imparts very little. They are like an electric circuit with snipped wires.
Cheers,
DW
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I do enjoy the essence of words, especially the best ones that are put down in the best order.
However, words do not contain any inherent wisdom. Using words correctly may transfer knowledge from one party to another, which may lead to wisdom in some people.
Using words poorly imparts very little. They are like an electric circuit with snipped wires.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
Comment from DanielEkine
"Standard of word usage makes the standard of one's personality. A word unwisely expressed may foster a poor personality that history does not count it adequately. As words open one's wisdom so wisdom reflects in one's words." my best part. Nicely written.
We are definitely what our personality reflects.
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"Standard of word usage makes the standard of one's personality. A word unwisely expressed may foster a poor personality that history does not count it adequately. As words open one's wisdom so wisdom reflects in one's words." my best part. Nicely written.
We are definitely what our personality reflects.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013