Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

I liked your post for the faith poem contest. It has a clear and definite message for the reader. I enjoyed reading it. Great submission.

Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Maureen

Suggestion:

"peace and faith love unbounded" // I think 'unbound' works better.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

Good Morning I am glad you liked the poem and I will check out the 'unbounded'.:-) Love you Maureen, have a good day, Carolyn

reply by Maureen's Pen on 22-Jul-2013

You too dear One.
Love
Maureen
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Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hello
It's just amazing to see how you have well placed these influential words.
The quatrains are rhyming and presentation is beautiful.
The words just soothe heart and mind and the spirituality could be felt.
You did an excellent narration.
Good luck:-)

Regards
Shar-A

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

Well thanks for this wonderful review. I am so happy you enjoyed Humility in Faith. Carolyn

Comment from rhonny

Good

It's quite a good poem and flows well with a regular rhythm, and the pic does it justice. But a couple of suggestions. I think some capitals wouldn't go astray here. For instance, Peace, Faith, Grace,Mercy, Righteousness, Self-Righteousness, Humbleness & Compassion. They are all proper nouns so deserve capitals, however you can choose to leave them alone as you have done. Also I think 'humbleness' should be humility although spell check didn't have a problem with it. Love the text and background colours.

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

I am glad you thought this was a good poem, that means a lot to me. I thought of the capitals, then due to 'humbleness' decided to leave them in lower case. Sometimes it is sweeter to draw less attention. Have a wonderful day, I appreciate you, Carolyn

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

I changed to humility as well. After reading several times I placed the word as it is in the Title. Thanks again. Carolyn

reply by rhonny on 23-Jul-2013

:O)

reply by rhonny on 23-Jul-2013

Thanks Carolyn. I really like it that you appreciate me. I do my best, but hate making upsetting choices in my reviews :O)

Comment from steevie

Excellent

Your poem resonates with your faithful course and your adherence to no doubt a fine and commendable lifestyle.
More people should praise God and in return, live better lives.
I got all that from your poem.

Well done, Carolyn

smiles
steve

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

I do my best :-) Thank you Steve so very much. Carolyn

reply by steevie on 22-Jul-2013

:o)

steve

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

Vivid truths of the Lord's attributes that He promised to us and anyone that would call upon His Name for their Salvation.
Lovely free verse style with much s good flow to your stanzas.
Charlene

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

Charlene, I appreciate your wonderful comments and that you liked this one. Carolyn

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Righteousness in faith is absolute, the modesty and humbleness in keeping faith is desired, a nice guide to usher and practice faith, a good inspiration unfolds. 28/721

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

Thank you for the great review. Have a wonderful week. Carolyn