Seduced
alerted, awakened and amazed....69 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Your vibrant and sensual explanations of your encounter with a kiss and with a touch makes one mine wander in a luxurious and luscious state. The poem was very well penned an easy to read and that's why blows off my tongue can't so easily. The words are well put together to make one understand each and every line. Thank you for sharing such a great poem. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Your vibrant and sensual explanations of your encounter with a kiss and with a touch makes one mine wander in a luxurious and luscious state. The poem was very well penned an easy to read and that's why blows off my tongue can't so easily. The words are well put together to make one understand each and every line. Thank you for sharing such a great poem. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Good morning AK,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and that you found it to convey
"...vibrant and sensual explanations of your encounter....in a luxurious and luscious state....well penned...words are well put together..."
All feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace,
Jill
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You you are welcomed Jill. <:~}
Comment from BunnyS
I loved it. It's packed with sensuality and passion. I love the vibrant blue of the picture and the background of the poem... Everything just fits. You did a really good job!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I loved it. It's packed with sensuality and passion. I love the vibrant blue of the picture and the background of the poem... Everything just fits. You did a really good job!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hello Bunny,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles. Like you, I am very fond of the artwork.
"...everything just fits. You did a really good job!"
feels even more wonderful than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
It will be a pleasure getting to know you through your poems.
Any favorite titles in your portfolio?
Peace,
Jill
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I loved the way your poem came together. It was really nice! A little seduction never hurt anybody! :)
I never considered myself a poet... but I have learned that if I have something very passionate to write about, I do okay. My favorites are Honor and A Mother's Prayer, both written with my son in mind...
I look forward to reading more of your work as well!
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Try " dancing in the kitchen" and "a question of forgiveness" for two completely different experiences.
Enjoy!
It will be a pleasure getting to know you though your work.
Plan to check out your poem suggestions in the next few days....
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from Quillian
A great shout out of discovering and understanding. Ah, the magical brew of tasting physical love. I like your line 'with brilliance and clarity I recall the taste of.....Kisses.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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A great shout out of discovering and understanding. Ah, the magical brew of tasting physical love. I like your line 'with brilliance and clarity I recall the taste of.....Kisses.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Good morning Quillan,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and that you found it to be
"a great shout out of discovery and understanding"
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from sunnilicious
True love deserves plenty blushes... hush your scuffed thoughts. Wonderful reflection. Creative and dripping with delightful visual imageries. Exceptional work.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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True love deserves plenty blushes... hush your scuffed thoughts. Wonderful reflection. Creative and dripping with delightful visual imageries. Exceptional work.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hello sunny,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and blushes.
"wonderful reflection. Creative and dripping with delightful visual imageries. Exceptional work"
Each word feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from dmt1967
Yes my friend I also believe in love at first sight and the first kiss from your soul mate is special very well written thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Yes my friend I also believe in love at first sight and the first kiss from your soul mate is special very well written thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hello deb,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles.
"very well written"
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
I know better now
my skin carries
the imprint of your touch
Lyrical...so serenely beautiful, uptowngirlchef1961. Your poetic prowess shines in this offering!
Love, true love, can elicit such emotions and stir such passions deep within us. You know when you've found it, because the feeling is unmistakenly like any we'd ever felt before!
Magnificent job.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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I know better now
my skin carries
the imprint of your touch
Lyrical...so serenely beautiful, uptowngirlchef1961. Your poetic prowess shines in this offering!
Love, true love, can elicit such emotions and stir such passions deep within us. You know when you've found it, because the feeling is unmistakenly like any we'd ever felt before!
Magnificent job.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Hello Dean,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and a happy stroll down memory lane. Your wife must be an exceptional woman and a truly loving partner.
"lyrical...so serenely beautiful....your poetic prowess shines in this offering!....magnificent job.
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
You blow me away with words like these
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from Steve Pantazis
Indeed, one might often scoff at the idea of being so soulfully connected to another, either through love or lust, but it happens. I particularly like the line, "sweet and savage kisses." It's something I would write in my poetry to my inamorata.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Indeed, one might often scoff at the idea of being so soulfully connected to another, either through love or lust, but it happens. I particularly like the line, "sweet and savage kisses." It's something I would write in my poetry to my inamorata.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Hello Steve,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and that
"sweet and savage kisses"
it's something that I would write ....to my inamorata"
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from DALLAS01
Just goes to show we should never think never. lol. Thanks for sharing the experience from this unique point of view. The poem flows nicely.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Just goes to show we should never think never. lol. Thanks for sharing the experience from this unique point of view. The poem flows nicely.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Hello DALLAS,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles.
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from rjuselius
you have found the holy grail of relationships. hard to find but when you do, it's emancipating,
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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you have found the holy grail of relationships. hard to find but when you do, it's emancipating,
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Good morning rebekka x,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and that you found it so pleasing
"you have found the holy grail of relationships..."
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello uptowngirlchef1961, Ahhh, you've described that awesome moment that when hits you like a ton of bricks, and there's no going forward and no going back once you've been stung by the love bug--no explaining it either, especially if that person is not your "type" or what your thought your type to be - lol. It just is.
I enjoyed reading this piece of romance poetry. I especially liked:
and
pleasure
beyond any imagining
still sings within my veins
sweeter than any nectar
upon the tongue
and
louder than the fiercest pain.
(I would concur that you are smitten)
up'chef1961, a heartfelt piece pulled from the emotions within your soul ~ very good.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hello uptowngirlchef1961, Ahhh, you've described that awesome moment that when hits you like a ton of bricks, and there's no going forward and no going back once you've been stung by the love bug--no explaining it either, especially if that person is not your "type" or what your thought your type to be - lol. It just is.
I enjoyed reading this piece of romance poetry. I especially liked:
and
pleasure
beyond any imagining
still sings within my veins
sweeter than any nectar
upon the tongue
and
louder than the fiercest pain.
(I would concur that you are smitten)
up'chef1961, a heartfelt piece pulled from the emotions within your soul ~ very good.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Good evening LateBloomer,
I am indeed pleased to learn that my poem "seduced" coaxed a few smiles and that you found it led you down a happy memory lane. Like you, I am very fond the artwork.
"....i enjoyed reading this piece of romance poetry....heartfelt piece pulled from the emotions within your soul-very good."
feels even more gratifying than it sounds!!
Thank you for loving this one. I wrote from memory and they are indeed the happiest of memories...
Peace, hugs and lots of smiles,
Jill
:-)
