Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

What a beautiful poem enhanced by a beautiful photo. Yes, He does. God appears to those who look for Him .Something you know well. Send this to Guide Post , they might buy it.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Great thoughts on your part Ben, as well. Thank you,Carolyn

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

This is a very beautiful spiritual poem. The Lords Hands
are in everything we see and do. The picture you selected really adds to the meaning of your words. Great job. Bill

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks Bill, I appreciate your comments. Carolyn

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

I need not look far
to see Your hand Oh Lord
In all creation of life
And breadth to know
Your hand is close enough
To clasp in mine

So true this write is. All one must do is to look around them to see the hand of the Lord everywhere. Sigh wonderful free verse.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Uh oh I need to change that to free verse instead of free style. Forgot my lesson already. :-) So glad you enjoyed, Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 09-Jul-2013

LOL

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

I did enjoy very much Carolyn!! One not look far to see the wonders that we have granted. To take the time to thank the one who made it all should never be considere4d time wasted.
TK

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks TK, good to hear from you, Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is another interesting and well written poem. I enjoyed every word of it and agree wholeheartedly to what you write.

Blessings, Kat

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks Kat, Hope you are having a fine Minnesota day!, Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 09-Jul-2013

It's grey and raining here. Nothing spectacular. At least it's cooler. Kat

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

there is so many people that don't give God credit and he deserves all credit. the photo was stunning and I love the words you used well doe

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thank you so much. I am delighted you like this one. Carolyn

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hello
it is a nice spiritual poem.
It paints a beautiful image where His presence could be felt everywhere.
The words used are apt and flow well.
You should extend this beautiful write.well done

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thank you for this sweet review. I meant to keep it in preview until completed. It now has a picture! And possibly more to each verse. :-) Carolyn

reply by The Death on 09-Jul-2013

That picture is just spot on..and the presentation too:-)

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

smile..