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Court Humour...43 total reviews
Comment from Cookie333
Hahahaha, I love the rhyme, the meter, the style, the flow...the HUMOR is right up my alley. Thank you so much for providing a much needed funny on this night.
k
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Hahahaha, I love the rhyme, the meter, the style, the flow...the HUMOR is right up my alley. Thank you so much for providing a much needed funny on this night.
k
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks k
Much appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers P
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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Toooo funny! I love your sense of humor and the manner in which you apply it. (your leather hide is bona fide) You are so right, we have to write poetry, we can't help ourselves. Sometimes I talk in rhyme which sets my family into a 'tizzy' of laughter. I enjoyed every work of your poem, and plan to read more. Carolyn
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Toooo funny! I love your sense of humor and the manner in which you apply it. (your leather hide is bona fide) You are so right, we have to write poetry, we can't help ourselves. Sometimes I talk in rhyme which sets my family into a 'tizzy' of laughter. I enjoyed every work of your poem, and plan to read more. Carolyn
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers P
Comment from Mastery
Funny lady. You have told everyone now, just in case somebody didn't know how clever and wonderfully funny you really are, Pip. LOL...Good job. Bob
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Funny lady. You have told everyone now, just in case somebody didn't know how clever and wonderfully funny you really are, Pip. LOL...Good job. Bob
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks muchly Bob.
I feel the need to toot my own horn now and again...modest huh? LMAO I promise to call into your port soon. I'm strapped for time these days. Business, family etc.
Hugs Pip
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Yes, Pip..and thank you I have posted two chapters so far to my new crime/thriller called "Fatal Beauty" X Bob
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I'm onto it
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I understand timeconstraints, belie3ve me...that's whyI can't spit out a chapter everyday like some...LOL...I will be postingchapter three this weekend thoo. Take care, Pip...Bob
Comment from Spitfire
Ah, now your user name makes sense. Maybe you put a warning in your notes: BEWARE: THIS POETESS BITES! Forthright and smart-ass you are. And definitely twisted.;-)
Shari
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Ah, now your user name makes sense. Maybe you put a warning in your notes: BEWARE: THIS POETESS BITES! Forthright and smart-ass you are. And definitely twisted.;-)
Shari
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Hey Shari, thanks so much...glad someone appreciates my twisted sense of humour.
Hugs P
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Comment from cvcopac
No charm or alcohol--well, there goes my chance. Some good self analysis and first class writing. I like the first stanza particularly. Once we master the meter it's hard to remove ourselves from it; it becomes a way of thinking the verse througth, out, or whatever. Perfect 8/7 iambics all the way with bonus rhymes on the eights and a perfect read. Kenny
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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No charm or alcohol--well, there goes my chance. Some good self analysis and first class writing. I like the first stanza particularly. Once we master the meter it's hard to remove ourselves from it; it becomes a way of thinking the verse througth, out, or whatever. Perfect 8/7 iambics all the way with bonus rhymes on the eights and a perfect read. Kenny
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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LMAO - okay, I make ONE exception. Come on over. LOL
Thanks so much for the sixer K, loved your review and I'm with you Commander. The meter sets the pace and I ALWAYS feel compelled to follow. As long as it flows and sounds catchy I'm in.
I hope I can call into your port soon, I know I missed a couple. Family and business is milking me dry at present, not to mention being a bit off colour too and easier to have a few early nights.
Take care. Hope you are well.
Hugs P
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Hi, P. I hoped everything was OK but, know you sometimes, like, Puck, disappear and reappear. Thanks, and glad to hear you're at least alive--take good care. Kenny
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I'm alive honey. Just been crook, whole family as well, committed to a business venture and everything is on top of me 'cept the hubby. LMAO I feel like it's slipping away but I'm determined to hang on to fs and some of the delightful people here for sometime yet.
Just not sure how I'm gonna do it.
Hugs P
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I know how that goes, being in business for my self many years. It's a drain and strain on personal relationships, especially in the beginning stages of the venture. We'll all be here when you're ready, so, take care of business, my pretty and talented friend. Kenny
Comment from gazzagodbod
I put all mine down to insanity lol you have the secret of good flow you are the bladder of the poetry world always taking the piss love ya xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I put all mine down to insanity lol you have the secret of good flow you are the bladder of the poetry world always taking the piss love ya xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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LOL love that, thanks gazza the bod man.
Cheers P
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Comment from Hitcher
:) The little imps are worth their weight in gold, a couple of dollars a week normally keeps them happy :) I know I wouldn't have you any other way mate, razor sharp, with that soft centered heart :)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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:) The little imps are worth their weight in gold, a couple of dollars a week normally keeps them happy :) I know I wouldn't have you any other way mate, razor sharp, with that soft centered heart :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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LOL Indeed they are...thanks for your delightful review.
Yep, thats me...abrasive exterior - marshmallow interior
Thanks for sixing me up. Always appreciate one from YOU
Hugs P
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Comment from MoonMuse
An amazing write! I was captivated from the very first line, and it just kept getting better. I love the steely boldness in your words. The meter and rhymes are fantastic. Gorgeous artwork too.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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An amazing write! I was captivated from the very first line, and it just kept getting better. I love the steely boldness in your words. The meter and rhymes are fantastic. Gorgeous artwork too.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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What a review! Many thanks I much appreciate your thoughtful analysis and sixer rating.
Have a wonderful day...Cheers P
Comment from Joan E.
I've been traveling and it is good to find your work on my return. Thanks for sharing your self-deprecating humor. My favorite bits were your clever rhymes along with your "river" simile and "leather hide" metaphor. No one would accuse of not being forthright! Happy weekend--our first of summer Up-Over- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I've been traveling and it is good to find your work on my return. Thanks for sharing your self-deprecating humor. My favorite bits were your clever rhymes along with your "river" simile and "leather hide" metaphor. No one would accuse of not being forthright! Happy weekend--our first of summer Up-Over- Joan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks so much Joan. I've been away from here myself for a bit.
Too much going on elsewhere to keep up. But I'm not stopping the writing. Just lots of stashing going on. Haha
Take care and I hope you are well.
Hugs P
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I'm glad to hear you are still writing and storing ideas for future pieces. Hope to see your work again as soon as time permits.
I'm working hard at being well! Hugs and have a pleasant weekend. -Joan
Comment from visionary1234
Good to see you posting again Pip! and for someone with no skill in metered verse, you certainly pulled the metrical rabbit out of the hat!
Inspite(In spite - 2 words) of any rumour
big hugs
Sharyn
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Good to see you posting again Pip! and for someone with no skill in metered verse, you certainly pulled the metrical rabbit out of the hat!
Inspite(In spite - 2 words) of any rumour
big hugs
Sharyn
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thanks Shazz...glad you enjoyed my metrical rabbit! Loved that analogy. And anyway, whats wrong with YOUR rhyme and reason? I happen to think you're iambic feet dance beautifully.
Big hugs back and sorry for tardy response. Been ill, and family and business tend to take up priorities.
Cheers P
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