Her World
My Beautiful Daughter15 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh yes they do for sure. God granted me a daughter 12 years after my boys were born. She had her moments in learning to sprout her wings but I wouldn't take anything for her. A poem straight from a mothers heart. great job. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Oh yes they do for sure. God granted me a daughter 12 years after my boys were born. She had her moments in learning to sprout her wings but I wouldn't take anything for her. A poem straight from a mothers heart. great job. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review.
Comment from Lucy26
Superbly written. Love the imagery to describe the person you love. Great flow. The world is her oyster
And she is it's pearl.
Open arms that embrace life
She charms the angels with her smile.
One by one they turn to look.
Graceful as a dove
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Superbly written. Love the imagery to describe the person you love. Great flow. The world is her oyster
And she is it's pearl.
Open arms that embrace life
She charms the angels with her smile.
One by one they turn to look.
Graceful as a dove
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Nice, a happy and pleasing poem. Your lovely similes do justice to the author's beauty. The author's rhymes and descriptions give life to his character, and paints his love as a special being.
Liberty Justice
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Nice, a happy and pleasing poem. Your lovely similes do justice to the author's beauty. The author's rhymes and descriptions give life to his character, and paints his love as a special being.
Liberty Justice
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I am sure you will love this one. It holds the heart and shares the love. I enjoyed it, I feel much the same with my children.
A lovely poem, beautifully penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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I am sure you will love this one. It holds the heart and shares the love. I enjoyed it, I feel much the same with my children.
A lovely poem, beautifully penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 18-May-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from donaldww
This is a heartfelt poem about your daughter. Your pride and love come through the words loud and clear. I like your last stanza: the world is a better place/when she smiles. I think you might consider removing the period at the end of place, and change 'when' to lower case on next line, since it connects together beautifully.
Cheers,
DW
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reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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This is a heartfelt poem about your daughter. Your pride and love come through the words loud and clear. I like your last stanza: the world is a better place/when she smiles. I think you might consider removing the period at the end of place, and change 'when' to lower case on next line, since it connects together beautifully.
Cheers,
DW
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Comment Written 17-May-2013
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Thank you for the great review and the helpful comments