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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Jaq I hope Indie read your very humorous tribute to her telling her--

so much fun
her humour writes
are full of wit '

although many do know ---
she's (NOT) full of shit

Gert

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Thanks Gert. I'm firmly in the 'Indie is NOT full of shit' camp. Your words are appreciated xx
reply by Gert sherwood on 09-May-2013
    You are welcome
    Gert
Comment from Empathy
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Like the work...like the sentiment...indiesputable...any friend of IS is a friend of mine...good work. Wish I knew what was going on properly. Cheers! E.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Thanks Empathy I'm all will become clear. I know Indie will be glad of your support :) Jaq xx
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Thanks Empathy I'm all will become clear. I know Indie will be glad of your support :) Jaq xx
Comment from jmdg1954
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A great poem in tribute to your friend. I've had minimal contact with her, but I can understand her frustration and its a down right shame it has to come to this. The wrong person is leaving the site!!
John

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    You are so right John but the powers that be have made it impossible for her to stay here with their inaction and their treatment of her. xx
reply by jmdg1954 on 09-May-2013
    I get it. Don't agree, but get it...
Comment from NicciFaye
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Ditto -----------------------Ditto ----------------------Ditto ----------------------- Ditto -----------------------
Priceless poem.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Lol Nicci.....glad you agree hahaha :) Jaq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
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lol Jaq - all these people breathing a sight of relief that I'm finally pissing off and you taunt them with this lmao. You are the best of friend's a Jewish Nun could ever have - you and Julie of course - my real fleshy friends :) Scotland will soon be chucking me out of their pubs too no doubt - can't wait mate :) And hey Jaq, I didn't even have to pad this review out with shit, so my account won't be suspended again for this one lol, Sending you love as always, your friend Indie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - that's how I was padding them out :D

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Hahahahahaha Indie-pop I can't wait until we are chucked out together xxx
reply by Indie Skreet on 09-May-2013
    lol - maybe if you do one naming Rondeno for the cheat he is, it will do the trick..... actually, please don't. I would hate for him to block you too :) xxxx
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    My arse would be out the window as well then. lmao....

    He's already un-fanned me ;-) xx
Comment from lakeport
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Jewish Nun,indeed that's a lovely heartfelt expressed poem
for your friend Indee Skreet, I enjoyed reading it, God bless uou. Lakeport.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    God bless you too Lakeport xxx Thank you x
reply by lakeport on 09-May-2013
    your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Debra White
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I completely echo your sentiments Jaq.
Indie's writes are always from the heart and pack a punch wether humorous, making a stand or gut wrenchingly raw. I for one will certainly miss reading her wonderful work.
'unique is she, in
every way
her honest words
will liars
flay
her treatment here
had been
absurd
made to feel
like someone's
turd'
Got to agree, the whole thing is more than farcical....
So glad we're in touch off site.
Wonderful poem Jaq - you made your point well and I'm sure the majority will agree :) Debra x

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Thanks so much Debra I speak to her most days. Well a few times a day and she has a huge heart and a deep sense of what's right. She's one in a million :) Jaq xx
reply by Debra White on 09-May-2013
    She certainly is one in a million (and has a filthy laugh to die for lol!!) Debra x
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Hahahahaha she does indeed Debra. lmao xxx
Comment from J. Dark
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Obviously a sixer, so I am sorry I have none. I have felt so down since Indie said she is leaving. I still hope I can persuade her otherwise, but totally understand and agree with her reasoning. It's not fair, Jaq. What can we do to talk her into it? It will be as fun if she is not here.

Love the poem and you capture Indie's unique spirit and humour with finesse, Jaq. I'm so sad, I'm not even sure I can manage an och aye the nu today.

Much love,

Julie :-)

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Awww Julie I feel the same girlie. :(. That bloody pride of hers!! Mind you, that's what I love about her and what makes her Indie. Let's hope we can work on her. Thanks for the review hon, Jaq xx
Comment from donaldww
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Cool. The site seems to be replete with poems about comings and goings of people on FS. And now this one for Indie Skreet. To me, she just got here, so it was a short lived visit.

I have seen some of her poems decrying mistreatment by some people, but honestly don't have a clue what's going on with that.

In the poem, it says you are her partner, therefore you must know what's going on. Which makes sense, since you've written this poem.

Enjoyable tribute to your friend!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    She's my friend Donald. Partners in crime only :). I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Jaq x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is very well-written; it speaks frankly on a subject I'm CONFUSED about. She's being banned from FS? As I told Indie the other day, when I FIRST find my self being offended by a poem, I simply move on.

 Comment Written 09-May-2013


reply by the author on 09-May-2013
    Yip Janice a few times her poems have been binned by the powers that be, just for her honesty. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq xx