My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The 'MeterMan' - free verse."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Indie Skreet
Lol. Something tells me you are missing this little ray of sunshine. He will approve of this for sure. A clever and witty write. Well done my sweet. Love indie xxx
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Lol. Something tells me you are missing this little ray of sunshine. He will approve of this for sure. A clever and witty write. Well done my sweet. Love indie xxx
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Just a wee bit of fun. Yeah Ray will be a huge miss on here as will you. Don't you think you are getting away with, my one for you is a work in progress already. :) Jaq xxx
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lol hun...... please don't. There is no need. I know how you feel and that is enough. Believe me Jaq, it really is not worth it. luv ya, Indie xx
Comment from lorijean
A beautiful poem dedicated to a lost poet, well written and with a touch of humour too, well written and an easy read, thank you for sharing God Bless
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A beautiful poem dedicated to a lost poet, well written and with a touch of humour too, well written and an easy read, thank you for sharing God Bless
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Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Lorijean, thank you so much for reading and reviewing yet again. Much appreciated, Jaq xxx
Comment from Earl of Oxford
LMAO, Jaq!
'Meter man' - I've been called worse, and it sure beats the Beatles' song, 'Meter Maid'. :-)
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it isn't electricity
that gives this guy
a buzz
nor is it the
North Sea gas
which lights his
fabled path
and water doesn't float
his boat
unless it's in his
whiskey
so who is it I
speak of
it's our 'meter man' - all flows perfectly, but then...downhill with a clunk meter-wise. Haha!
Oh, who cares, as I'm brilliantly flattered by your hilarious write, Jaq, and thanks so much.
Ray xx
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reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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LMAO, Jaq!
'Meter man' - I've been called worse, and it sure beats the Beatles' song, 'Meter Maid'. :-)
'
it isn't electricity
that gives this guy
a buzz
nor is it the
North Sea gas
which lights his
fabled path
and water doesn't float
his boat
unless it's in his
whiskey
so who is it I
speak of
it's our 'meter man' - all flows perfectly, but then...downhill with a clunk meter-wise. Haha!
Oh, who cares, as I'm brilliantly flattered by your hilarious write, Jaq, and thanks so much.
Ray xx
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Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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How very dare you!! It sounded fine in my head... LMAO..
Sooooo is it working?? :)