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Joseph

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Joseph Part 4 The Reveal"
The story of Joseph told in verse.

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Comment from dmt1967
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This is another good chapter the first verse I struggled with it didn't flow as well as the other verses I liked the picture as well thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 01-May-2013


reply by the author on 01-May-2013
    Thanks so much.
Comment from barkingdog
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A bit of pay back. Joseph scared his brothers before telling them the truth.
Your information that shepherds were the lowest caste and smelled bad being the reason Joseph's family was given Goshen was an interesting fact.

 Comment Written 01-May-2013


reply by the author on 01-May-2013
    I think he was enjoying himself. =} Rox
Comment from God's Writer
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Another well written poem my little friend. Also a wonderful story about God's watching over us. No matter what the circumstances are. They all can be used for his glory. Thank you

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 Comment Written 01-May-2013


reply by the author on 01-May-2013
    Thanks so much, rox
Comment from chasennov
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'Joseph Part 4 The Reveal.' This Biblical story which you had put into a poem is absolutely worthy of praise. I too do have done this kind of poem and also scripts. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-May-2013


reply by the author on 01-May-2013
    Thank you very much. Rox
reply by chasennov on 01-May-2013
    You're very welcome, Rox.