Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "April's Passing"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
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Comment from dragonpoet
This poem flows will I like he mixture or end rhyme and internal rhyme. Also the quotes some of which are said by the matching poet and some alluding to others. If they are lamenting the loss of the women in the picture than it looks like she did die peacefully.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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This poem flows will I like he mixture or end rhyme and internal rhyme. Also the quotes some of which are said by the matching poet and some alluding to others. If they are lamenting the loss of the women in the picture than it looks like she did die peacefully.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review, dragonpoet. :)
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You're welcome, Dovey.
dragonpoet
Comment from Jean Lutz
The exercise is over, but poetry lives. You and muse should take a leisure albeit short break and then start all over again. Here's to May!
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reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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The exercise is over, but poetry lives. You and muse should take a leisure albeit short break and then start all over again. Here's to May!
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you, Jean. Wonderful advice! :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very clever final write for NaPoWriMo Dovey with all the famous poets named and gathered in the cemetery to mourn April's passing. Well done.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Very clever final write for NaPoWriMo Dovey with all the famous poets named and gathered in the cemetery to mourn April's passing. Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Pearl. Remember, I mentioned the Poet's round table? lol Well, still toying with that idea, when this one came to me. Thank you for all of the wonderful reviews this month. :) I'm pleased we have met.
Kim
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Me too I've enjoyed challenging myself this month.
