Joseph
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Joseph Part 2 The Dream"The story of Joseph told in verse.
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Comment from hellspook
Nice review of genesis 41. I like abridged bible poetry because it makes me read a book I never did, piece by piece.
This part is linked to the butler because if he never had met him in jail, Joseph would never had the reputation of a dream-reader. I think you should have mentioned him in the poem.
I will fan you because you might just make another one like these someday.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Nice review of genesis 41. I like abridged bible poetry because it makes me read a book I never did, piece by piece.
This part is linked to the butler because if he never had met him in jail, Joseph would never had the reputation of a dream-reader. I think you should have mentioned him in the poem.
I will fan you because you might just make another one like these someday.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I still have 3 more parts to this one. =} Thanks, I'll look at it again. I was afraid of it getting even longer so left some parts out, but will see if I can fit it in. Thank you. Rox
Comment from 4hisglory
I've heard a lot of sermons on the life of Joseph lately, so very familiar with those verses. You have told this story wonderfully in this poem. The rhyming and flow are good.
The only thing I question is the last stanza that seems out of character with the rest of the poem with the 3 lines. Don't know if you planned it that way or just needed that last line to finish the story?
Blessings, LaVonne
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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I've heard a lot of sermons on the life of Joseph lately, so very familiar with those verses. You have told this story wonderfully in this poem. The rhyming and flow are good.
The only thing I question is the last stanza that seems out of character with the rest of the poem with the 3 lines. Don't know if you planned it that way or just needed that last line to finish the story?
Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Yes I wanted it know Joseph went by an Egyptian name and that is another reason his brothers won't know him. I'll look it over again, maybe I can fit it in else where, there are still 2 more parts to go. Thank you for the good review and suggestion. Rox
Comment from Dean Kuch
A wonderful poetic retelling of the epic chapters in Genesis of the Holy Bible. I always appreciated the symbolism and meaning ingrained within the very fabric of this tale. Your presentation was crisp and well crafted. I really enjoyed this!
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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A wonderful poetic retelling of the epic chapters in Genesis of the Holy Bible. I always appreciated the symbolism and meaning ingrained within the very fabric of this tale. Your presentation was crisp and well crafted. I really enjoyed this!
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much Dean. Rox