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Home Sweet Home

Home business leaves little space for living.

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Comment from Gungalo
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Overwhelming mess.
Too much clutter in the house!
Where does one begin?

Usually one begins in the worst corner of the house. LOL or in this case ... anywhere. LOL

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    :) Prayer! I definitely should start with prayer! LOL!
reply by Gungalo on 25-Apr-2013
    That too. LOL
Comment from Laurent Andre Menot
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Looks like my home, a huge mess which makes me feel totally overwhelmed by the amount of work and the time it will take me to do some nice cleaning!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    I'm HOPING to attack the garage today, but kitchen first, always the kitchen first! LOL! :)
reply by Laurent Andre Menot on 25-Apr-2013
    Kitchen is more important than everything else!
    And I need to eat first, before doing any work, especially cleaning the house!
    Good luck with the garage! :))
Comment from Indie Skreet
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I have to laugh at this one, because I have just taken a break from moving back into my old home with a flat full of new stuff and have nowhere to put anything, so could not have been read at a more appropriate time :) best Indie

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    Glad you were able to enjoy a laugh! Hope you can find places for everything! :)
Comment from NicciFaye
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That's how my office looks. No matter how many times I go to straighten it up, it turns right back into the mess. LOL, lovely poem, captured and expressived. Home sweet home, yes, yes, yes.

God bless.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    Thanks! We must be kindred spirits! I just can't keep on top of it! I clean, my husband comes home, I turn around, it's a mess! My daughter moves back from university and unloads her life in the living room until she gets around to putting it away. SO glad I'm not alone!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Mix of business and home would endow such a state of dilemma, sweet home would appear in shamble, a good message with quest is nicely flown, I liked the thoughts. 5/254

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    Thank you! =) "Shamble" is spot on!
Comment from Righteous Riter
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The syllable count is correct in this piece. The photo is very fitting for the piece. The message is clear as this piece speaks to my heart the words organized clutter.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
    Thank you! Unfortunately, the photo is my reality. I clean up after my husband and kids; within days it is a disaster again!