My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Where I used to be."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Rondeno
This excellent then-and-now poem, set in bold octosyllabic couplets, is a real success. The poet makes a stark contrast between her former, unhappy self, and her new situation of contentment and awareness of self-worth. Really well done.
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This excellent then-and-now poem, set in bold octosyllabic couplets, is a real success. The poet makes a stark contrast between her former, unhappy self, and her new situation of contentment and awareness of self-worth. Really well done.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much Meehal. You are too kind :), much love, Jaq xxx