First Novel
This is a nonet about writing one's first novel.27 total reviews
Comment from sunshinelover
I really like this nonet, RodG. It has a lot of depth and makes me wonder why the speaker has no more use for that first novel now. Was it so bad that it wasn't worth revising? Is there a better novel in the works? Has the speaker given up writing altogether? What other stuff did he have stashed away? You give us a glimpse into this man's life, and I want to know more (perhaps you could write further nonets about him?). My curiosity is piqued because you deal obliquely with the novel (only the title reveals what "it" is), so that there's equal if not greater emphasis on the speaker.
In particular, I like the use of the word "rites" (this reveals something about the man's character, I think) and the scrap/crap rhyme, along with the assonance of scrap/crap/stashed. The alliteration in the first line also adds to the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I really like this nonet, RodG. It has a lot of depth and makes me wonder why the speaker has no more use for that first novel now. Was it so bad that it wasn't worth revising? Is there a better novel in the works? Has the speaker given up writing altogether? What other stuff did he have stashed away? You give us a glimpse into this man's life, and I want to know more (perhaps you could write further nonets about him?). My curiosity is piqued because you deal obliquely with the novel (only the title reveals what "it" is), so that there's equal if not greater emphasis on the speaker.
In particular, I like the use of the word "rites" (this reveals something about the man's character, I think) and the scrap/crap rhyme, along with the assonance of scrap/crap/stashed. The alliteration in the first line also adds to the poem.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, sunshine lover,for such a thoughtful review. Indeed there have been other novels since, but the first remains my favorite because it took so long to write. It's a YA novel about a girl growing up during the Summer of Watergate, 1973. Maybe I'll share a chapter or two on FanStory someday. RodG
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So the speaker is you in this case (I never like to assume that's the case). If you ever do post a few chapters, I'd love to read them.
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Thank you for your encouragement. You've got me thinking seriously now . . .
Comment from krowboom
Great nonet with lots to say but make the word crap go away.
They want an expanded review so here is what I have to say to you. Keep up the good work keep up the vibe whether it's a nonet, monet, or simple diatribe.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Great nonet with lots to say but make the word crap go away.
They want an expanded review so here is what I have to say to you. Keep up the good work keep up the vibe whether it's a nonet, monet, or simple diatribe.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks, Krowboom, for your generous stars and interesting comments. I would consider your suggestion of removing the offensive word except I really wish to preserve the rhyme with "scrap.". Rod G.
Comment from ravenblack
been there. all I can say is that if you have to ask, put it in the fire. I am not being derogatory - I've done the same w/many notebooks, old poems that just weren't worth carrying around anymore, all the old " i'll go back to it" and you can't because your sensibilities have matured.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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been there. all I can say is that if you have to ask, put it in the fire. I am not being derogatory - I've done the same w/many notebooks, old poems that just weren't worth carrying around anymore, all the old " i'll go back to it" and you can't because your sensibilities have matured.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you, ravenblack, for your fine review and sage advice. RodG
Comment from dmt1967
This poem I can relate to many a time I have tidied up and debated on throwing something away I don't use only to find when I have thrown it away I need it lol nice poem thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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This poem I can relate to many a time I have tidied up and debated on throwing something away I don't use only to find when I have thrown it away I need it lol nice poem thank you for sharing
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you, dmt, for reading and review this poem. I guess I feel the same way, knowing if I did throw it away I'd regret it later. RodG
Comment from lorijean
Hope it became a book, been locked away for years, it could be a best seller, nice little verse, and the artwork is just perfect.....
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Hope it became a book, been locked away for years, it could be a best seller, nice little verse, and the artwork is just perfect.....
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you, lorijean, for your gracious review and comments. I don't know what it could be, but unlikely a best seller. I appreciate the encouragement. RodG
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry is well written and it makes sense. I like
the way that the words are arranged on the page. It
guides the reader's eyes and it flows smoothly. Thank
You for your creation.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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This poetry is well written and it makes sense. I like
the way that the words are arranged on the page. It
guides the reader's eyes and it flows smoothly. Thank
You for your creation.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your careful, thoughtful reading and review. RodG
Comment from tedanytime
This is a fine verse that shows that it is wise to go back to a work that time may reveal should be renewed.
We may write many stories that are not worthy but an oldie can have some charm.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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This is a fine verse that shows that it is wise to go back to a work that time may reveal should be renewed.
We may write many stories that are not worthy but an oldie can have some charm.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your gracious review and wise advice. RodG
Comment from Indie Skreet
lol and I have more than a few of those - bet many on here do. Always writing and never doing anything with it, except posting on here! This poem of yours is a good reminder to not just shove it in a dresser or leave lingering on the computer :) another good write Rod, best Indie
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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lol and I have more than a few of those - bet many on here do. Always writing and never doing anything with it, except posting on here! This poem of yours is a good reminder to not just shove it in a dresser or leave lingering on the computer :) another good write Rod, best Indie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thank you, Indie, for the wonderful review and the encouragement. RodG
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer gives a message that is clear and to the point. Not only is the message clear, it makes sense and takes the reader where the reader needs to go. This piece meets the syllable count of the Nonet poem and hold the attention of the reader.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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The writer gives a message that is clear and to the point. Not only is the message clear, it makes sense and takes the reader where the reader needs to go. This piece meets the syllable count of the Nonet poem and hold the attention of the reader.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Righteous, for your review and gracious comments. RodG
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Rod G a poem that I answer with please don't toss any thing that the writer has writtn.
I know I wouldn't. File them away for the future
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hello Rod G a poem that I answer with please don't toss any thing that the writer has writtn.
I know I wouldn't. File them away for the future
Gert
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi, Gert! Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem, but mostly for your encouragement and support. I haven't tossed it yet. RodG