Dogwood Daze
A 5-7-5 Short Poem Entry16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Dogwoods stunt is well featured in this Haiku, the story is retold softly and briefly, I liked the indicative mood and mode of dogwoods celebration and convention in beginning and ending of flower season Spring. 4/054
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Dogwoods stunt is well featured in this Haiku, the story is retold softly and briefly, I liked the indicative mood and mode of dogwoods celebration and convention in beginning and ending of flower season Spring. 4/054
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Alcreator, for a very gracious review of Dogwood Daze and for such kind and glowing words. I am also grateful for the stars. I do appreciate that you noticed the mood and mode and convention as well.
Comment from PhilThePoet
You captured the essence of spring brilliantly. Made me feel (and wish) I was sat underneath one of these beautiful trees.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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You captured the essence of spring brilliantly. Made me feel (and wish) I was sat underneath one of these beautiful trees.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I am glad to know that you liked Dogwood Daze, Phil. Thank you for your kind words and review. I am bowled over!
Comment from warbler
I enjoyed your poem. I liked the image of the dotted Swiss and the illustration. The poem had action with the dogwood skirts bouncing into spring and the trees popping with strung pearls. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I enjoyed your poem. I liked the image of the dotted Swiss and the illustration. The poem had action with the dogwood skirts bouncing into spring and the trees popping with strung pearls. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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So glad that you enjoyed Dogwood Daze. Thank you for your encouraging comments and stars. I am pleased that you like the imagery!
Comment from words
Love your 5/7/5 on spring's glorious wardrobe.
Dotted Swiss delight-
Dogwood skirts bounce into spring.
Trees pop with strung pearls.
You painted a delightful portrait here.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Love your 5/7/5 on spring's glorious wardrobe.
Dotted Swiss delight-
Dogwood skirts bounce into spring.
Trees pop with strung pearls.
You painted a delightful portrait here.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and words on the submission for the short poem contest. I am grateful for your generosity.
Comment from Econ Teacher
This contest though does not ask for a haiku, defintely this could be categorized as one because of the nature theme and count on syllables. I think that adds to the poem that it is a definite form. The descriptions are good. Though I admit I needed the notes to understand what it meant.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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This contest though does not ask for a haiku, defintely this could be categorized as one because of the nature theme and count on syllables. I think that adds to the poem that it is a definite form. The descriptions are good. Though I admit I needed the notes to understand what it meant.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I hope the notes were helpful. I suppose Dogwood Days is a bit girly, but I am glad you "got it." Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I am grateful for your kind words and encouragement.
Comment from thoughtsofanormal
I really liked this piece, it gave me the feeling of winter ! it had alot of imagery in such little amount of words. good luck in the future! Your great!
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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I really liked this piece, it gave me the feeling of winter ! it had alot of imagery in such little amount of words. good luck in the future! Your great!
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much, Thoughts. I really appreciate that vote of confidence, your kind words, and all those stars. And thanks for reviewing Dogwood Days.
With gratitude.
