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mbagby23
I wonder myself. One it is warm then the next it is back cold. I think that you did a good job with the syllable count. I am still waiting for the weather to catch up with calendar.
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Comment from
anndimp
Oh! It's heart rendering. The plight of the bird is painful. The poetry had nicely brought out its thoughts that moment. The syllable count for Whitney is perfect
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