Conversations in Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "On Wuthering Heights"NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 poems in 30 days
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Comment from Pierre Francis
You have neatly encapsulated the story of Wuthering Heights and the little dig at Bronte makes one smile. Your syllabic count is bang-on, but if the requirement is that the poem's supposed to rhyme, yours isn't. If rhyme isn't a requirement, then this one's as good as it gets, with just a touch of irony and humour.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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You have neatly encapsulated the story of Wuthering Heights and the little dig at Bronte makes one smile. Your syllabic count is bang-on, but if the requirement is that the poem's supposed to rhyme, yours isn't. If rhyme isn't a requirement, then this one's as good as it gets, with just a touch of irony and humour.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I appreciate your kind comments and review.
Comment from Indie Skreet
ooh, it seems to be getting better on fanstory. excellent write here and to be honest I could have given so many sixes today, including this one, so I am well out. just so you know, i don't give sixes easily or fives for that matter, so I must like a lot :) best Indie
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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ooh, it seems to be getting better on fanstory. excellent write here and to be honest I could have given so many sixes today, including this one, so I am well out. just so you know, i don't give sixes easily or fives for that matter, so I must like a lot :) best Indie
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thanks for the huge compliment, Indie. :)
