Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

sucha passionate and lustful piece of poetry! i love the imagery, it is beautiful. especially the stanza with the stars.
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Rebekka so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your kind review. Jaq xxx

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

wow Jaq, a bit early for this steamy little number ...... I know what you were up to last night lol. I would six you for this one too, as I love it - it and the poem lol. luv ya girl, take care, Indie xx

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Cheers Indie it awoke me at bloody just after 3 am. I had to write it down half asleep :) love ya, Jaq xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 20-Mar-2013

lol, me too - last night and every bleedin' night. Not sure if it's a blessing or a curse, cos I hardly manage more than a few hours sleep a night. In your case Jaq, most certainly a blessing girl xx

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thanks Indie xxx

Meant to be bloody working hahahaha

reply by Indie Skreet on 20-Mar-2013

yeah me too, but I can't be arsed to look for a job at the moment. Hey ho, I guess when I am in cardboard box land, I might be more inclined to do something about it lol xx

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

lol my daughter just got married I have a spare room. I wouldn't see you on the streets girle :) xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 20-Mar-2013

lol. hopefully it won't come to that and besides as long as I have a bottle besides me, I will be fine - just hope it won't have to be turps lol xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 20-Mar-2013

oh yeah and thanks for the offer, but believe me, you would live to regret it - others have :D xx