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Comment from juliedickson55
Cute little 5-7-5 animal poem.
I like Tweedie bird, and recall his particular dialect.
Bishop's twee is funny.
Nice job on this humorous topic
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Cute little 5-7-5 animal poem.
I like Tweedie bird, and recall his particular dialect.
Bishop's twee is funny.
Nice job on this humorous topic
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from beccabootie123
this is too cute. which came first the picture or the verse. veeery orginal. good luck in the contest. good entry well done
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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this is too cute. which came first the picture or the verse. veeery orginal. good luck in the contest. good entry well done
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I found the picture and thought it would fit this contest.
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Knight to bishop's twee
Taut I taw a puddy tat
I been bad...Checkmate!
This poetry is a fun read. The attached photo is a
befitting accent helping the reader to visualize
the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Knight to bishop's twee
Taut I taw a puddy tat
I been bad...Checkmate!
This poetry is a fun read. The attached photo is a
befitting accent helping the reader to visualize
the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Huge smiles author
I got a big kick out of Tweedy bird saying tat instead of cat
Your last line is a blast
good luck
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Huge smiles author
I got a big kick out of Tweedy bird saying tat instead of cat
Your last line is a blast
good luck
Gert
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from starkat
Nice play on words - Tweety Bird is smarter than the average bird when it comes to playing chess, especially if she knows all the variations in the Sicilian Defense. Most birds are read birdbrains when playing thinking games. Tweety is witty, and her heart's a'twitter as she flits and flutters through the combinations - she also loves to sandbag when she knows she's got her opponent beat - distracting them with the 'puddy tat' line to throw them off guard. She's a master of the understatement, as well. Witty and bright, Tweety's a delight. Would love to play a game of chess with her though she might easily ruffle my feathers.
Excellent contests entry as you incorporate that famous line -- 'I taut I taw a puddy tat' - playing games with and outwitting Sylvester. Cute picture you found for your poem.
Good luck in this contest. Well done ... ;o)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Nice play on words - Tweety Bird is smarter than the average bird when it comes to playing chess, especially if she knows all the variations in the Sicilian Defense. Most birds are read birdbrains when playing thinking games. Tweety is witty, and her heart's a'twitter as she flits and flutters through the combinations - she also loves to sandbag when she knows she's got her opponent beat - distracting them with the 'puddy tat' line to throw them off guard. She's a master of the understatement, as well. Witty and bright, Tweety's a delight. Would love to play a game of chess with her though she might easily ruffle my feathers.
Excellent contests entry as you incorporate that famous line -- 'I taut I taw a puddy tat' - playing games with and outwitting Sylvester. Cute picture you found for your poem.
Good luck in this contest. Well done ... ;o)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your very kind, thoughtful, and encouraging review.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I remember tweety !!! I didn't know he could play chess. You have written a very humorous 5-7-5 poem and the syllable count is perfect. Good luck, Carolyn
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I remember tweety !!! I didn't know he could play chess. You have written a very humorous 5-7-5 poem and the syllable count is perfect. Good luck, Carolyn
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from BeasPeas
Well Tweety sure amazes me. He's a chess player, too. Adorable photo to accompany your words. Is that to read, "I been bad" or "I been had?" Either way works.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Well Tweety sure amazes me. He's a chess player, too. Adorable photo to accompany your words. Is that to read, "I been bad" or "I been had?" Either way works.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is funny... a chess playing... birdie. Well presented and it complies to the contest rules. I hope you have good luck . Nice job!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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This is funny... a chess playing... birdie. Well presented and it complies to the contest rules. I hope you have good luck . Nice job!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Cute 5-7-5 true to writing prompt and syllable count. Adorable artwork choice. I love the first line! Poor tweety bird, checkmated without seeing it coming! Shame on dat puddy tat!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Cute 5-7-5 true to writing prompt and syllable count. Adorable artwork choice. I love the first line! Poor tweety bird, checkmated without seeing it coming! Shame on dat puddy tat!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from hifein
I wonder if this is an aussie (check mate) sorry about that. It is a Itvery good 5-7-5. It's clever -- 'loved twee' especially. good job.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I wonder if this is an aussie (check mate) sorry about that. It is a Itvery good 5-7-5. It's clever -- 'loved twee' especially. good job.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.