My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Wondering Why? (free style)"All of my poems of release.
14 total reviews
Comment from Bindu Saxena
It's a nice piece that delves into our everyday life. It keeps us into a web of mental activities like why it had to be so, why it could not be that?
It's a kind of self-discourse that we do what the author has discussed.The poem makes us think and gives an intense insight about life.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
  |
It's a nice piece that delves into our everyday life. It keeps us into a web of mental activities like why it had to be so, why it could not be that?
It's a kind of self-discourse that we do what the author has discussed.The poem makes us think and gives an intense insight about life.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
-
I'm glad it made you think Bindu, thanks for reading this. :) Jaq x
Comment from c_lucas
It is a bad thing to have an hyperactive mind when one wants to rest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
|
It is a bad thing to have an hyperactive mind when one wants to rest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
-
Many thanks to you for your kind review and yes I agree a little more sleep would have been better. :) Jaq x
-
You're welcome, Jaq. Charlie
Comment from Enrique28
A fine little verse. I think it's a reflection of a time of life when we find it hard to see the bigger picture, and thus we keep, at best wondering why, at worst probably screaming. Excellent illustration. Good show! Enrique
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
|
A fine little verse. I think it's a reflection of a time of life when we find it hard to see the bigger picture, and thus we keep, at best wondering why, at worst probably screaming. Excellent illustration. Good show! Enrique
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
-
Thank you so much for your review Enrique :) Jaq x
Comment from October21
This is SO great! Love the stand alone words and the artwork. Many of us find ourselves in this position. When things go right for us we don't question it, are only grateful and then when bad things happen to us we start to wonder: why me? What did I ever do?
I don't believe in God but If I did I would say: God punished Eve and he said all people are equal so he has to punish the rest of us in some way or another.
This really got me thinking!!:-)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
|
This is SO great! Love the stand alone words and the artwork. Many of us find ourselves in this position. When things go right for us we don't question it, are only grateful and then when bad things happen to us we start to wonder: why me? What did I ever do?
I don't believe in God but If I did I would say: God punished Eve and he said all people are equal so he has to punish the rest of us in some way or another.
This really got me thinking!!:-)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
-
Thank you so much Shenel, love to hear your thoughts. They are usually bang on. Jaq xx