Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Marillion
Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give
Very nice sentiments, Jewell. What a beautiful picture to go along with your words, too.
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Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give
Very nice sentiments, Jewell. What a beautiful picture to go along with your words, too.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from Lainee
JJ the beginning and the ending of this poem are so strong
and you have managed to fill the body with beauty along the way. Awesome, serene thoughts on a new day with a wonderful pic to compliment what you are saying.
Seek the truth
of promise
and find it
before your eyes
It hides itself
in tiny observations
of daily renewal
Beautiful!
Goodluck,
Lainee :O)
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JJ the beginning and the ending of this poem are so strong
and you have managed to fill the body with beauty along the way. Awesome, serene thoughts on a new day with a wonderful pic to compliment what you are saying.
Seek the truth
of promise
and find it
before your eyes
It hides itself
in tiny observations
of daily renewal
Beautiful!
Goodluck,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from Louanne
Lovely and full of the hope
that comes each year with
the Springtime.
"Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give"
Vivid images painting
a portrait of promise.
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Lovely and full of the hope
that comes each year with
the Springtime.
"Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give"
Vivid images painting
a portrait of promise.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
very nice!
great message!
"Have you found
your promise
today?
Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give"
thanx for sharing :-)
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very nice!
great message!
"Have you found
your promise
today?
Find a blessing
in every day you live
Find a promise
in each touch you give"
thanx for sharing :-)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from nutcase
Okay you did it .... You have topped all of your other works. This one is beautiful and it has greatness written all over it... I would like to use my normal word but this tops all your works for sure other than your personal things that you have shared. Its for SURE A BIG HIT.... Nutcase
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Okay you did it .... You have topped all of your other works. This one is beautiful and it has greatness written all over it... I would like to use my normal word but this tops all your works for sure other than your personal things that you have shared. Its for SURE A BIG HIT.... Nutcase
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from Diny
in each touch you give
I shudder with enlightenment
A first kiss
that could melt
the coldest heart ... I have no doubt!
which reminds us
to be thankful ...I am very
The first budding
of spring ....my favorite season!
Now that I have used your own words... I await more you are so good!
Write on
touch more
feel more
live more
Be happy
you already are blessed
Diny
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in each touch you give
I shudder with enlightenment
A first kiss
that could melt
the coldest heart ... I have no doubt!
which reminds us
to be thankful ...I am very
The first budding
of spring ....my favorite season!
Now that I have used your own words... I await more you are so good!
Write on
touch more
feel more
live more
Be happy
you already are blessed
Diny
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from Susanne
It's the little everyday things that make a life. The grand events can be wonderful, but the tiny pleasures are the fabric of real living. Your poem illustrates this perfectly. A sweet ode to the seemingly unimportant things, that in reality are the most important things. Superb. :-)
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It's the little everyday things that make a life. The grand events can be wonderful, but the tiny pleasures are the fabric of real living. Your poem illustrates this perfectly. A sweet ode to the seemingly unimportant things, that in reality are the most important things. Superb. :-)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
Comment from Mastery
I love the picture too. The writing continues to excel in so many ways. You just seem t oget better wit heach writing. Lot of truth in this work too. I am running out of things to compliment you on, Mrs. Poetess. Bob
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I love the picture too. The writing continues to excel in so many ways. You just seem t oget better wit heach writing. Lot of truth in this work too. I am running out of things to compliment you on, Mrs. Poetess. Bob
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2005
