haiku (silken mist lingers)
5-7-5 haiku contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Cariboubill
Beautiful haiku. The words bring the picture to mind. The lilac colors were chosen well to represent the haiku. Good syllable count, good subject matter.
...Bill
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Beautiful haiku. The words bring the picture to mind. The lilac colors were chosen well to represent the haiku. Good syllable count, good subject matter.
...Bill
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Many thanks, Bill
Comment from judelesemann
Beautifully written poem You have in a few short verses and less words painted a very beautiful picture in your poem. Well done. Keep on writing. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Beautifully written poem You have in a few short verses and less words painted a very beautiful picture in your poem. Well done. Keep on writing. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Thank you Jude
Comment from Matthew M.
I liked the use of "L" words repeated in each line. This haiku shows the picture through its description which is good.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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I liked the use of "L" words repeated in each line. This haiku shows the picture through its description which is good.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Thank you Matthew
Comment from Rmocruz
Great workflow in this pleasant haiku,
creating peaceful imagery.
Very appropriate illustration.
Better your mist linger languid, than
your lilacs.
Peace,
Rich.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Great workflow in this pleasant haiku,
creating peaceful imagery.
Very appropriate illustration.
Better your mist linger languid, than
your lilacs.
Peace,
Rich.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Wonderfully creative review. Thank you, Rich
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I'm very pleased, Thank You as well.
Comment from AnonymousWisdom
I have never given six stars to a haiku, but this will be the exception to that rule. Beautiful flow, perfect syllable count, and incredible description and word choice. This was an amazingly visual piece. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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I have never given six stars to a haiku, but this will be the exception to that rule. Beautiful flow, perfect syllable count, and incredible description and word choice. This was an amazingly visual piece. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Well, you made my day! I write a lot of haiku, and am so happy you liked this one enough to give an exceptional. This one has been rolling around in my head for a long time.LOL
Comment from mizzkris20
I love your 5-7-5 poem (Haiku) I love lilacs and you have done them justice in this beautiful, short poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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I love your 5-7-5 poem (Haiku) I love lilacs and you have done them justice in this beautiful, short poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much for the great review