Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Wind rider
There is beauty and love portrayed in this poem. The tears shed become dew drops that bring to life roses in a celestial garden. The different stanzas create different aspects of the care and love felt. There are a few minor mistakes. You cannot gather "a beautiful crystalline waters", "here after" should be "hereafter" and "Do you sense my descent?" not "decent". Conventional beautiful images have been chosen, while each stanza explores some different aspect of your emotion.
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There is beauty and love portrayed in this poem. The tears shed become dew drops that bring to life roses in a celestial garden. The different stanzas create different aspects of the care and love felt. There are a few minor mistakes. You cannot gather "a beautiful crystalline waters", "here after" should be "hereafter" and "Do you sense my descent?" not "decent". Conventional beautiful images have been chosen, while each stanza explores some different aspect of your emotion.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
