My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Perfect Day - Free Verse"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from mruss1
Sorry you only get a five:( This quite superb you should share it with her. The dress it awesome and she looks so happy:) You know you need not miss your little girl she is always there in your thoughts:) Take care my friend and have a great day.....Mark
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Sorry you only get a five:( This quite superb you should share it with her. The dress it awesome and she looks so happy:) You know you need not miss your little girl she is always there in your thoughts:) Take care my friend and have a great day.....Mark
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind review, much appreciated x
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You are always welcome:)They didn't post by name but I guessed yours right off:) I have to be honest I didn't even read the rest. I went there to supprt you:) Mark
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Awww thank you Mark xx
Comment from Candyjean
Your poem was a good read. Flowed nicely and rhyming was perfectly done. It is hard when our children grow up and harder when they move away. Keep up the writing, and I will keep reading.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Your poem was a good read. Flowed nicely and rhyming was perfectly done. It is hard when our children grow up and harder when they move away. Keep up the writing, and I will keep reading.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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I think you may have reviewed the wrong poem mine isn't rhyming. Thanks for the 4 stars anyway.
Comment from retiredprof55
What a nice tribute to your daughter. There is a nice flow to your poem but I felt some need for rhyme. It just felt incomplete without it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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What a nice tribute to your daughter. There is a nice flow to your poem but I felt some need for rhyme. It just felt incomplete without it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Jaq
Comment from Bina1
What a fine tribute to a new life together! Oh for those new, romantic times they will share. Fine poem, good luck in the contest. A fine entry you offer here.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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What a fine tribute to a new life together! Oh for those new, romantic times they will share. Fine poem, good luck in the contest. A fine entry you offer here.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much Bina1 :) Much appreciated.
Comment from country ranch writer
Happy days are for the love bird
as they leave the nest to see
the what awaits them in the new
names and place. we wish them love
and lots of joy as they go forth into their new life.
seeing your little girl all grown up and married and cutting the apron strings tugs at the heart. she is off to a brand new start. it is time to let go
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Happy days are for the love bird
as they leave the nest to see
the what awaits them in the new
names and place. we wish them love
and lots of joy as they go forth into their new life.
seeing your little girl all grown up and married and cutting the apron strings tugs at the heart. she is off to a brand new start. it is time to let go
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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That is so right :) xx
Comment from Joannforsberg
Touched my heart. A wedding nothing expresses the concept of love more than a wedding. Such a nice blessing you offer to them. I am sure you will share this with your daughter. Beautiful. JO
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Touched my heart. A wedding nothing expresses the concept of love more than a wedding. Such a nice blessing you offer to them. I am sure you will share this with your daughter. Beautiful. JO
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much Joann, I will indeed x
Comment from Trevor Jenkins
I think you certainly captured the essence of the 'big day' is that what the u.s calls it too? You should write a bigger poem, it will be great. The photo of the happy couple was perfect to use.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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I think you certainly captured the essence of the 'big day' is that what the u.s calls it too? You should write a bigger poem, it will be great. The photo of the happy couple was perfect to use.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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I'm not from the US, and yes, one day I will expand on this. Thanks for your review.
Comment from poseytoon
Well, I think you nailed this emotional thing -- What a great day you had! Thank you for sharing your "Perfect Day" with us
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Well, I think you nailed this emotional thing -- What a great day you had! Thank you for sharing your "Perfect Day" with us
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you poseytoon :) It was indeed.