Comment from FLutterodt

Excellent

This feeling I must say is not for only those 'have nots' many of the 'haves' often have issues that make the day so tensed. I pray for healing of love and marriages. This poem will comfort many hearts. Well done for the rhymes and the metaphor ' we can plant ourselves to see what grows'. A creative way of putting it. Well done

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013

Thank you. Yes, expectations are often no met, leaving the day unhappy~Debbie

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

A nice Valentine poem for those who might be feeling a little low this Valentines Day. Fortunately, I can let the day pass without worry.

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013

Thank you. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Dacker

Excellent

Light and airy, easy to read as it flows nicely. Good imagery.."sappy" is a great word. I liked the ending as there is hope...thanks, Dan

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2013

Thank you!!! Debbie