Crystal Spirits
a nonet26 total reviews
Comment from Dacker
Nice poem. I like the first line as it is melodic with "delicate white descending..." Good imagery to pack into a poem with a limit of syllables. You have good flow and readable for the type of this poem that doesn't seem it would be easy. Good Job...Dan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Nice poem. I like the first line as it is melodic with "delicate white descending..." Good imagery to pack into a poem with a limit of syllables. You have good flow and readable for the type of this poem that doesn't seem it would be easy. Good Job...Dan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
What a beautiful nonet to describe snow. Love the descriptive words used. It conveys the subtleness, I find, when it snows as if the world has come to a stand still in peace. Brilliant write and best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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What a beautiful nonet to describe snow. Love the descriptive words used. It conveys the subtleness, I find, when it snows as if the world has come to a stand still in peace. Brilliant write and best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Chanphy
That is a very beautiful poem that accurately captures the falling snowflake. You have very successfully described the magic of the snowflake and the work it does by shining like jewels covering the earth beautifully.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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That is a very beautiful poem that accurately captures the falling snowflake. You have very successfully described the magic of the snowflake and the work it does by shining like jewels covering the earth beautifully.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from gazzagodbod
beautifully presented with the perfect picture for the piece so love your work my friend never stop writing loved it xxxgazzagodbodxxx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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beautifully presented with the perfect picture for the piece so love your work my friend never stop writing loved it xxxgazzagodbodxxx
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks for such an enthusiastic review. I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from October21
Hiya there! So much beautiful imagery throughout and especially towards the end:-) great personification of earth as you mention it's sleeping soul. Excellent flow throughout also.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Hiya there! So much beautiful imagery throughout and especially towards the end:-) great personification of earth as you mention it's sleeping soul. Excellent flow throughout also.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
Check your heading - Chrystal? This little poem says a lot about the love of God. Every crystal snowflake is unique, as is every human. I loved your poem, light and fragile as a snowflake. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Check your heading - Chrystal? This little poem says a lot about the love of God. Every crystal snowflake is unique, as is every human. I loved your poem, light and fragile as a snowflake. Beautiful.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Whoops!Thanks for pointing out the error. My spelling is often so bad, it looks like another language. Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from fairy77
The title has an h in crystal?Enjoyed spirits alive and jewels shine.This is a lovely nonet and was feel good.I enjoyed the display:)Nice piece.beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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The title has an h in crystal?Enjoyed spirits alive and jewels shine.This is a lovely nonet and was feel good.I enjoyed the display:)Nice piece.beth fairy77.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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The title is a spelling error. Thanks for pointing it out. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from donaldww
This is an excellent nonet that seems to be about snow. The individual flakes are personified as life forms, God's angelic spirits.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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This is an excellent nonet that seems to be about snow. The individual flakes are personified as life forms, God's angelic spirits.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from 4tulips
This is a good poem about snowflakes and their description. It is also nice to know that no two snowflakes are the same. So when we think of all the snow that has carpeted our land, it is awesome to think that each are different.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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This is a good poem about snowflakes and their description. It is also nice to know that no two snowflakes are the same. So when we think of all the snow that has carpeted our land, it is awesome to think that each are different.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Black_Oxygen
delicate white descending life forms
capture the heavenly guidance
of sending God's angelic
crystal spirits alive
white blanket covers
earth's sleeping soul
jewels shine
bright
This poetry is true to the nonet form and flows nicely.
Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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delicate white descending life forms
capture the heavenly guidance
of sending God's angelic
crystal spirits alive
white blanket covers
earth's sleeping soul
jewels shine
bright
This poetry is true to the nonet form and flows nicely.
Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine