Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Oh, I say! This is a rather passionate one. I really like it, Jacqueline, but whatever I try to type come out like Kenneth Williams ... Oooh, matron!

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013

Lol, a bit of a carry on Michael :) Just wanted to try this out and see how it goes. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq x

reply by Rondeno on 02-Jan-2013

Please forgive me. I honestly think the poem is lovely, but I was in a silly mood. It's hard to tell which of the lovely girls in the photo is you ... the one who's not puckering for a kiss?

Mike xxx

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013

Nothing to forgive my friend. I was just having a wee joke. I am on the end, then I'm sure you can see the age difference ;-)...lol. We were just having a laugh on Hogmanay. Thanks for your review I always appreciate them. xx

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jaq, this one flowed well done the page. It felt like it picked up speed as I read it. Creative and great imagery really helps make this work pop out some for the reader.
Thanks for sharing it a great job overall.:)
Maureen

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013

Thanks you so much Maureen. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x