Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Brilliant! You were too good for him. Great control of meaning (so easy to lose, when fiddling around with tight syllables) - and terrific art work.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thank you so much for that great review :) Jacqueline x

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

great little poem very descriptive and vivid of a boat that's meet the wrath of the ocean.

lovely presentation

great job

Regards
Tia

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thank you so much Tia you're very kind. :) Jaq x

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

I enjoyed this little story of one who has been tried and triumphed over adversity. At least that's what I got from it. Thank you so this lovely piece and imagery

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thank you TOMORAL you are indeed correct. :) Jaq x