haiku/senryu suite
(first flakes gently land)12 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This work was wonderfully penned. I've not seen a senryu built this way but it sure was a treat to read.
I loved each one just as much as the one before. Lovely building and awareness of all the Christmas cheer. We are without snow at the moment, probably be a dull looking Christmas, I do so love a white Christmas. So thanks for sharing one.
Happy Holidays
Maureen
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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This work was wonderfully penned. I've not seen a senryu built this way but it sure was a treat to read.
I loved each one just as much as the one before. Lovely building and awareness of all the Christmas cheer. We are without snow at the moment, probably be a dull looking Christmas, I do so love a white Christmas. So thanks for sharing one.
Happy Holidays
Maureen
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thank you and have a Merry Christmas~Debbie
Comment from EMB
Yes, this gives us so many scenes and images of what the first snowfall must bring from around Atlanta, GA and north of their. The way you describe it makes me sometimes wish I grew up in colder weather, but I don't like the cold so much.
Great job stacking the haiku. Excellent format. Excellent poem.
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Yes, this gives us so many scenes and images of what the first snowfall must bring from around Atlanta, GA and north of their. The way you describe it makes me sometimes wish I grew up in colder weather, but I don't like the cold so much.
Great job stacking the haiku. Excellent format. Excellent poem.
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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I would stay where it is warm! Thank you and have a Merry Christmas~Debbie