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And then there's Grace

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A collection of Spirtual poems

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Comment from Rondeno
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You're absolutely right. Everything we do should be inspired, whether it be our poetry or the way we say hi to somebody in the street.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your remarks. You are correct, our culture has reached a point a hello on the street is almost an extinct practice. Regards, Carol
Comment from Jina Sarma
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beautiful poem with meaning. you are thoughtful poem. you are
skilled poet. you are clear about your thoughts, emotions and feels. your language use is good.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
    Thank you Jina for your nice comments and understanding of the poem. I appreciate your insight. Best wishes, Carol
Comment from L. Sherman
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I love, love, love this! It's so true that inspiration can come form everywhere. It can be the most minute, insignificant seeming thing in the world, but in they eyes of someone with 'the gift' everything is full of untapped potential. I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees it this way, nor considers the talent of writing (or perhaps more importantly -- the love of it) a gift). Inborn talent can only take you so far, after all.

Love this, again.

L. Sherman

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Wow! Thank you so very much for the wonderful review. I am glad that you loved the poem. I actually wrote it several years ago but find that I feel the same way today. Best wishes to you for continued success in 2013. Carol
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend this is very well a unique writing and it reads very well telling us so much about why you write and where you get your inspiration I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Thank you, Jill for the review. Have a great and inspired New Year. Carol
Comment from anarchist12
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You truly did an amazing job crafting this poem .. indeed well written and expressed
throughout .. loved your closing stanza

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your encouragement and review. Best wishes to you always, Carol
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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You certainly created a unique poem on all that inspires you in your writing. I liked the variety within your post here.

Its not singled out one specific topic but in general the ability to let what ever inspires you to flow freely.
Great work in this one. I enjoyed the read and excellent connection with your reader.

Thanks for sharing and Happy Holidays.
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012

    Thank you so much Maureen I appreciate that you read my work and took the time to comment in this busy time of the year. I wish you the very best in 2013 and always. Carol
reply by Maureen's Pen on 22-Dec-2012
    Thank you Carol and you too:)
    Hugs
    Maureen
Comment from Starlit Ink
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Your poem shows an appreciation for all that writing can do for the soul. It is indeed a gift that is given to only a lucky few, and you certainly share your gift in this piece. To be gifted and inspired is to know that you are loved. I'm sure that most of the writers on this site can relate to this.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    I thank you so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement. I wish you the very best always, Carol
Comment from Frank Atwood
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What is inspiring to some may be dejected by others, as one must find their own truths and tie their beliefs to this world and all upon it. Yet, to overcome this world and renounce all within it, is hard to do even for the least of us who are Gods children.
Very good and keep up the great writing. As we are all inspired by the truths we seek throughout this life in hopes of being happy. God bless

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Thank you Mr. Atwood for your encouragement and the insightful review. I wish you the very best in 2013 and always. Carol
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Yes, I believe it is a gift from God and we are instruments of his will. I try to keep his word in most of my poetry.
Good over evil. Merry Christmas. Very well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Nancy, I thank you so much for your wonderful comments regarding the poem and wish you the very best for 2013 and always. Carol
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Yup, I think you're right. God wouldn't let our minds wok this way if he didn't want us to do something with it. Nice flow to this. The rhyme was great and this was very enjoyable. Nice job.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem. I appreciate your comment. I wrote 'Inspired' several years ago and feel the same today. Best wishes always, Carol