My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "Life's Journey."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Rondeno
Hi, Jacqueline!
What I love about this poem is, it describes the difficulty of living, and charts our human frailties, but it is resoundingly hopeful. Optimism shines all the way through it.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Hi, Jacqueline!
What I love about this poem is, it describes the difficulty of living, and charts our human frailties, but it is resoundingly hopeful. Optimism shines all the way through it.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Rondeno, it is lovely of you to review my poem. Optimism is something we all need to get by. :) Jaq x
Comment from TOMORAL
You spoke straight into my heart and soul, dear. Wise words for all to read and ponder. We all make mistakes, but our past does not determine our future! Good flow and meter. Great Job.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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You spoke straight into my heart and soul, dear. Wise words for all to read and ponder. We all make mistakes, but our past does not determine our future! Good flow and meter. Great Job.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thanks for your great review Tomoral, it is very much appreciated. :) Jaq x