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Nonet entry for the Personification of Winter Contest
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Comment from
Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Absolutely great read. Good rhyme scheme. Ballerinas motioning like the adjectives describing falling snow turn out to bow. Very neat. Cheers.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
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aml224
Excellent. You remained within the form of (n-1), while at the same time matching the pace of the poem to the imagery. The images during the dance flow with the gerunds (leaping, whirling, twirling, sparkling, shining) and then it stops. "Shines" gives a good sense of stillness after the motion. I really like "Cold moon."
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
This such an insightful review. Thank you so much.
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