Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows and rhymes well and I think you express loneliness very well in your poem. I also like the spiritual message and artwork.

Angel123

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thank you so much Angel123 for your kind review.

Comment from expressions9

Excellent

This is an excellent poem that really describes the state of loneliness and fits the writing prompt, with a good image to match!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thank you for your kind appraisal.

reply by expressions9 on 29-Nov-2012

You're welcome.

Comment from ocruickshank

Exceptional

God, I really liked this ..enough to use my last 6 star rating. If you check my rating history, I'm not an easy grader. The flow, structure, and imagery are great. But, the thing that wins me over is this ....your poem really yanks at a persons heart strings. We've all felt this way and loneliness is aptly described here...Thanks for sharing! Great job!! I love the style simple but impacting...

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Wow!! Thank you so very much for the great review and wonderful rating. Much appreciated.

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

This is a great contest entry the flow is good. the picture adds to the presentation. What a great read. thanks for sharing. Deorre

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks Deorre for a lovely review.