Comment from DMCranfield

Excellent

Very clever poem. It is summed up very nicely in only four lines. This is the first time I have come across this type of poem. It was fun, succinct, and enjoyable to read.

Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012

Thank you veddy much - noice of you.