Keeping Promises
For my oldest son15 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
keeping promises, that's a very heartfelt and loving expressed story poem, God blees all the men and women in Uniform.Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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keeping promises, that's a very heartfelt and loving expressed story poem, God blees all the men and women in Uniform.Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the great review and warm sentiments.
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your welcome.
'Could you please review my poem "Total Blackout" thank you, Lakeport.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I second that emotion. That is a wonderful write MOM. It sounds as though you did a good job and raised a fine young man. God bless him and all who love him and bring him safely home. Kudos. Nancy
Just know that God is there( with you) and has you in his sight. Just a suggestion.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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I second that emotion. That is a wonderful write MOM. It sounds as though you did a good job and raised a fine young man. God bless him and all who love him and bring him safely home. Kudos. Nancy
Just know that God is there( with you) and has you in his sight. Just a suggestion.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Again, thank you for the great review and rating and the kind words.
Comment from EMB
This was a wonderfully tender poem, my friend. Sometimes I forget that you're old enough to have sons fighting for our country's freedom. So you must be around thirty-nine instead of twenty-nine. :) You started rhyming, but you abandoned it. Then your return to it at the end. Doesn't bother me. Just stating it, wondering if the rhyming was even intentional.
A great poem, G.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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This was a wonderfully tender poem, my friend. Sometimes I forget that you're old enough to have sons fighting for our country's freedom. So you must be around thirty-nine instead of twenty-nine. :) You started rhyming, but you abandoned it. Then your return to it at the end. Doesn't bother me. Just stating it, wondering if the rhyming was even intentional.
A great poem, G.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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I don't know either, just had to get it down. I am fifty one in real life, won't even go where that is in dog years. Thanks for the wonderful review. When ever I write poetry I'm kind of like a blind man in a round room trying to find the corner. :)
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LOL The beauty of that is that the corner is wherever you decide it to be, and no one can argue with you. :)
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Thank God for you Edward M.Baldwin, you always manage to point out the bright side. Even with dim eyes I can see it. Thanks.
Comment from Angels27
Every word resonates in my heart...and that of every single mom I guess. We hold our babies in our hands and our lives are transformed forever. They will always remain our little ones.....however, old they are.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Every word resonates in my heart...and that of every single mom I guess. We hold our babies in our hands and our lives are transformed forever. They will always remain our little ones.....however, old they are.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you. I haven't seen my son in four Christmases. I know I miss him more than anything but this site helps me express it and through the feed back I know there are others going through the same or worse.
Comment from mommerry
You have written a beautiful message/prayer acknowledging your son's choices as right for him and reafferming your love for him. God bless him and you, for raising him to be the man that he is. We pray for our servicemen always!r son
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You have written a beautiful message/prayer acknowledging your son's choices as right for him and reafferming your love for him. God bless him and you, for raising him to be the man that he is. We pray for our servicemen always!r son
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the great review and kind comments. Thank you for your prayers.