My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 165 "senryu (what wondrous sight)"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from terry drake
your senryu was well written and the image was delightful. Pretty girl. The 5-7-5 syllable count seemed easy to maintain on the delivery of your three line poem.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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your senryu was well written and the image was delightful. Pretty girl. The 5-7-5 syllable count seemed easy to maintain on the delivery of your three line poem.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Many thanks for your kind review as always.