Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Rose of Sharon"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
30 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely poem with a powerful message about our Savior.
I love the flower (Rose of Sharon). It's beauty is like that breath of wind that gave you the words.
Beautiful.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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A lovely poem with a powerful message about our Savior.
I love the flower (Rose of Sharon). It's beauty is like that breath of wind that gave you the words.
Beautiful.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your review and your comments about the Lord. It's beautiful to read such a lovely reaction-just like the beauty of the flower itself.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
My given name is Sharon, for the Rose of Sharon, my Grannie named me this. Your sweet poem reminds me that He is carrying me through life, for now, I am lame... I needed to read this and you have given me a corner of faith to park my chair...Big Red. Excellent work and a given poem from a faithful servant of I Am...
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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My given name is Sharon, for the Rose of Sharon, my Grannie named me this. Your sweet poem reminds me that He is carrying me through life, for now, I am lame... I needed to read this and you have given me a corner of faith to park my chair...Big Red. Excellent work and a given poem from a faithful servant of I Am...
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review, it was so inspiring input it made me very happy because of knowing that it encouraged you and made you happy inside.
With love and appreciation,
Gb
Comment from SimplyaStudent
Hey your not bad at all. This is the second poem in a row that I have read and liked quite a bit. Keep on writing what comes to mind! :) SS
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Hey your not bad at all. This is the second poem in a row that I have read and liked quite a bit. Keep on writing what comes to mind! :) SS
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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I really enjoyed reading the review you gave me and I'm glad that you liked it. It was nice to read what you said "not bad at all." Really beautiful spirit. Thank you SimpleStudent
Comment from Sueellen11
This is beautiful my friend,, the rose of Sharon,,, my lord, my life, my salvation,,, great write,,, well done,, I so enjoyed this read,,I al so wrote a poem called the rose of Sharon,,, blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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This is beautiful my friend,, the rose of Sharon,,, my lord, my life, my salvation,,, great write,,, well done,, I so enjoyed this read,,I al so wrote a poem called the rose of Sharon,,, blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I'm so happy you found my poem and thankful for your beautiful and heartfelt reaction. With love and kindness, Gb
Comment from Day Z Chayn
You say this poem came to you like a breath of wind, fully formed. In this way, one is reminded of what transpired w/the Apostles during the Pentecost.
You plant a seedling here, which grows into a forest from a single tree.
Christ planted seeds each time He acted or spoke.
May each word of your own be a seed.
Let nothing in life be construed as a joke.
Blessings,
Shane
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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You say this poem came to you like a breath of wind, fully formed. In this way, one is reminded of what transpired w/the Apostles during the Pentecost.
You plant a seedling here, which grows into a forest from a single tree.
Christ planted seeds each time He acted or spoke.
May each word of your own be a seed.
Let nothing in life be construed as a joke.
Blessings,
Shane
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your wonderful and helpful review. With blessings, gudbjorg
Comment from Matoshka
What a gift and a blessing. Faith, love from the Father above. I loved how smoothly this flowed, and the emotion of faith and love that you shared in the words. Beautiful picture. Blessings
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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What a gift and a blessing. Faith, love from the Father above. I loved how smoothly this flowed, and the emotion of faith and love that you shared in the words. Beautiful picture. Blessings
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and helpful review. With blessings, gudbjorg
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You are so welcome, is was a pleasure to read. Blessings
Comment from ishitasingh02
I do like the spiritual take of it. The end of it, the question it poses is perhaps the best part of it. You have a beautiful choice of words :)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I do like the spiritual take of it. The end of it, the question it poses is perhaps the best part of it. You have a beautiful choice of words :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank your for your words and feelings about my poem. It was truly helpful. With my best wishes, gudbjorg
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is a very well written poem my friend. It is easy to read and understand. It held my attention. I found no errors at all. And I enjoyed reading it. It is excellent.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a very well written poem my friend. It is easy to read and understand. It held my attention. I found no errors at all. And I enjoyed reading it. It is excellent.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from BunnyS
Nicely done! I love the message you convey about faith. You chose a beautiful picture and your entire poem looks beautiful. Beautiful words, and a beautiful message! You did an awesome job!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Nicely done! I love the message you convey about faith. You chose a beautiful picture and your entire poem looks beautiful. Beautiful words, and a beautiful message! You did an awesome job!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it had a positive effect on you. I look forward to meeting Him in person. That will make everything worthwhile. See you there!
Comment from ste7e
not religious type myself,so can only rate this as an agnostic,keeping that in mind,its good that you take the time and trouble to capture the thoughts that inspire you.though it has done nothing for me ,a little tritely fervent and fell away in the last verse,especially the last two lines.but I am not your target reader,those who believe in deities of one sort or another ,and find comfort in them .might find this has deeper meaning and inspire them.to inspire is the greatest gift one human can have.sorry it has not done that for me ,good luck,keep writing that which touches you.after all that's said and done.your the only one that matters.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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not religious type myself,so can only rate this as an agnostic,keeping that in mind,its good that you take the time and trouble to capture the thoughts that inspire you.though it has done nothing for me ,a little tritely fervent and fell away in the last verse,especially the last two lines.but I am not your target reader,those who believe in deities of one sort or another ,and find comfort in them .might find this has deeper meaning and inspire them.to inspire is the greatest gift one human can have.sorry it has not done that for me ,good luck,keep writing that which touches you.after all that's said and done.your the only one that matters.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for being frank and forthright. I appreciate your openness. I had an experience that changed my life and recognise that, without that, I might have the same feelings as you. So for me, it was an experience rather than a religion - which I'm not so fond of, myself. Thank you for your critique of the poem itself and your encouragement.
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thank u for your reply,and for taking my thoughts on your work in the manner they were intended.with honest candor,no slight to you,or harmful intentions.I sometimes get a little too blunt.I very much appreciated your return comments,thank you,