haiku (moonlit night at beach)
A haiku15 total reviews
Comment from visionary1234
oh yes, I think I've been there too! Grief seems even worse when surrounded by overwhelming beauty, does it not? Lovely write, and good luck in the competition! :) Sharyn
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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oh yes, I think I've been there too! Grief seems even worse when surrounded by overwhelming beauty, does it not? Lovely write, and good luck in the competition! :) Sharyn
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Hello Sharyn, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Angels27
A very beautiful emotional Haiku lines. The picture is also compelling. The last line...slow salty tears...is very eloquently worded. All the best. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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A very beautiful emotional Haiku lines. The picture is also compelling. The last line...slow salty tears...is very eloquently worded. All the best. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Hello Angels, my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Poet. This one definitely feels as though the writer likes to go to the beach to shed the weight of burden that they carry. I liked the play on words too. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Hello Poet. This one definitely feels as though the writer likes to go to the beach to shed the weight of burden that they carry. I liked the play on words too. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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xoxo my friend, I am honored and pleased by your visit, thank you very much for the wonderful/encouraging review, take care.
Comment from ernesto escarro
Moonlit Night At Beach
You feel sad memories at moonlight night,
tears echoing scream, tearing the heart,
slow drying tears tasting salty.
Have been expecting for joyous moment of the soul.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Moonlit Night At Beach
You feel sad memories at moonlight night,
tears echoing scream, tearing the heart,
slow drying tears tasting salty.
Have been expecting for joyous moment of the soul.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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ernesto my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review, take care.
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Thanks for sharing.
Comment from rjuselius
"moonlit night at beach
echo tears tearing my heart
slow, slow salty tears"
this is a beautiful imagery you have painted! salty tears flowing in the ocean.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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"moonlit night at beach
echo tears tearing my heart
slow, slow salty tears"
this is a beautiful imagery you have painted! salty tears flowing in the ocean.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Hello rebekka, my friend, I am pleased you like the write, thank you very much, please take care.
